打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (state preference), then give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing (e.g., "On my opinion" → "In my opinion").

範例: In my opinion I prefer typing. Firstly, it is less tiring on my hands, and secondly it’s easy to correct mistakes without ruining the whole page. For example, when I type I can quickly edit a sentence, which saves time and keeps my work neat.

建議: Organize the answer: give the direct answer first, then two clear supporting points with concise language and correct vocabulary. Remove redundancy and fix grammar (e.g., "more light" → "lighter"). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas coherently.

範例: I type on a laptop every day. I prefer it because it’s lightweight and portable, so I can work in different places like my bedroom or a coffee shop with Wi‑Fi. A desktop would be impractical for me since it’s heavy and not easy to move.

建議: Give a clear time reference and avoid confusing or repetitive details. Use correct past tense and concise background information. Link your statements with words like 'because' or 'since' and provide one brief supporting detail about how you learned.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard in 1997, when I was about 11 years old. At that time computers were just becoming common in my area, so our school introduced typing lessons to replace the old typewriters.

建議: Answer directly and give specific methods and a brief example. Use correct verb forms and avoid vague phrases. Mention concrete practice techniques and a result to make the answer more persuasive.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For instance, I open a Word document and do timed typing exercises, focusing on accuracy and speed. Over time this has reduced my errors and increased my words-per-minute.

× On my opinion, I prepare typing because if I type it's less strain on my hands and if I made errors I just cut and then type again.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer typing because if I type it's less of a strain on my hands and if I make errors I just delete and then type again.

Use 'In my opinion' not 'On my opinion' (incorrect preposition). 'Prefer' is more natural than 'prepare' here. Use present tense 'make errors' to match habitual action. Use 'less of a strain' with 'of' and 'delete' or 'cut' in computer context; 'cut' alone is unnatural.

× But if I had write, I need to make sure that I wrote it legibly without any errors and if I made a mistake it will look it will look unpolished, which is not nice.

✓ But if I had to write, I would need to make sure that I write it legibly without any errors, and if I made a mistake it would look unpolished, which is not nice.

Use conditional structure: 'had to write' or 'were to write' for hypothetical. Match verb tenses in conditional clauses: 'would need' and 'would look'. Use present simple 'write it legibly' for the action required, and avoid repeated phrase 'it will look it will look'.

× I don't have a desktop so I I type in the laptop keyboard every day because for me laptop is more more accessible and it's more light, lightweight.

✓ I don't have a desktop so I type on a laptop keyboard every day because for me a laptop is more accessible and lightweight.

Use 'on' with 'type on a keyboard' (preposition correction intertwined with pronoun/article). Remove duplicate 'I'. Use article 'a laptop' before singular countable noun. Use 'lightweight' or 'light' but not both; 'more lightweight' is redundant; 'more accessible' is fine.

× You can bring it everywhere in the coffee shop with there is a free Wi-Fi in my upstairs bedroom whenever I need it and downstairs I can bring it literally everywhere.

✓ You can bring it everywhere, to coffee shops, and there is free Wi-Fi in my upstairs bedroom, so whenever I need it I can use it; downstairs I can take it literally everywhere.

Fix prepositions and sentence structure: 'to coffee shops' not 'in the coffee shop with there is'. Break run-on sentence into clearer clauses. Use 'take it' rather than 'bring it' for moving from home; ensure commas and conjunctions to clarify meaning.

× Desktop is very heavy.

✓ A desktop is very heavy.

Use article 'a' with singular countable noun 'desktop'. Without the article the sentence is ungrammatical in this context.

× I learned how to type in the keyboard when they release the computer back in 1997 when I was around 11 years old, because computer is not popular that much.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when computers were released around 1997; I was around 11 years old because computers were not very popular then.

Use past tense 'were released' and plural 'computers' for general statements. Use 'on the keyboard' not 'in'. Use 'were not very popular then' for past state. Correct word order and plurality.

× So it it become released on 1997 because we have before typewriter.

✓ So it was released in 1997 because we had typewriters before.

Use past tense 'was released' and preposition 'in' with years. Use past perfect/ past 'had typewriters before' to indicate previous technology. Remove duplicate 'it' and fix 'become' to 'was'.

× So yeah, that's how I start using it.

✓ So yeah, that's how I started using it.

Match past tense 'started' to the earlier past context; 'start' incorrect for past narrative. Use past participle 'started'.

× They say practice makes perfect, so I keep on practicing and in open the Word document and then the more I practice the more I improve.

✓ They say practice makes perfect, so I keep practicing and open a Word document; the more I practice, the more I improve.

Use 'keep practicing' rather than 'keep on practicing' (both possible but streamline). 'Open a Word document' is correct form; remove 'in'. Add comma and semicolon for clarity and correct comparative correlative structure 'the more... the more...'.