打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答自然但有重复与口头语，句子过长且不够结构化。应直接开门见山给出主题句，避免重复（如“because maybe because”）并减少填充词（uh）。可以在回答后再用一两句具体原因或例子支持，例如说明什么时候喜欢手写或手写带来的好处。

範例: I prefer handwriting. I enjoy the tactile feeling of a pen on paper and even the scent of paper, which makes writing more personal. For example, when I take notes in lectures, handwriting helps me remember information better than typing.

建議: 内容有用但表达混乱且包含不必要的细节（家庭经济状况），有语法和重复问题（“and I think and also”，“very is and very useful”）。建议先给主题句（I use a laptop），然后简洁列出一两个具体理由，用连接词保持逻辑。避免不相关或敏感信息。

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard. It’s portable and convenient for studying and travelling, so I find it more practical than a desktop for my daily use.

建議: 回答已包含时间和来源，但有语法错误和重复（“very very great at good at it”，“in in a minute”），以及夸张或不准确的速度表述。建议用一到两句清晰叙述学会时间和方式，再给出一条具体但准确的成就或现状描述。

範例: I learned to type when I was ten through a school computer class. Since then I’ve practised a lot and now I can type quite quickly—about 60 to 80 words per minute.

建議: 回答不够正式且存在口语填充词和语法问题（句子碎片、不完整）。此外，内容含糊且带有不雅描述（“grow gross”）。建议直接说明改进方法或習慣，例如定期练习、使用打字软件或关注正确姿势，并用连接词组织逻辑。

範例: I haven’t practised systematically, but I improved by regular use and practice. Recently I’ve started using online typing exercises for 15 minutes a day to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I love the feeling of the pen in my hand and the scraping of it against paper, and I also love the scent of paper. Uh, and because maybe because typing uh, it, it makes my fingers uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I love the feeling of the pen in my hand and the scraping of it against paper, and I also love the scent of paper. Maybe typing makes my fingers uncomfortable.

句中出现冗余和不正确的动名词搭配“because maybe because typing uh, it, it makes”。动名词“typing”可以作主语，但不需要额外的代词“it”或重复的“because”。建议去掉多余的词，使动名词短语直接作为句子主语："Maybe typing makes my fingers uncomfortable." 这样更简洁、语法正确。

× I type on a laptop keyboard because while my family isn't very rich in IT and they can't afford a desktop computer and I think and also because the laptop is easy to carry and very is and very useful, so I use a laptop keyboard.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard because my family isn't very rich in IT and can't afford a desktop computer. Also, the laptop is easy to carry and very useful, so I use a laptop keyboard.

原句中有重复、连词使用混乱以及“in IT”可接受但句子结构冗长且“very is and very useful”语序错误。将句子拆分并调整词序：把原因分成两句，并去掉多余的“and I think”与重复的词，使表达更流畅。这里并未改变介词，但修正了介词短语在句中的位置和整体结构。

× I learned to type when I was 10. I learned it from a school program. It teaches you how to type and I've grown very very great at good at it. I now can type like 100 words in in a minute.

✓ I learned to type when I was 10. I learned it from a school program. It taught you how to type, and I've become very good at it. I can now type about 100 words in a minute.

原句中时态混用和词汇搭配错误：``It teaches you''与前句过去时不一致，应改为过去时“taught”。“I've grown very very great at good at it”中“great at”用法不自然，改为“become very good at”。“I now can”词序不自然，改为“I can now”。另外去掉多余的重复“in in”和用“about”更符合口语表达。

× I never concentrated on improving my typing because, uh, I just type and type and and my fingers just grow gross. Familiar with the keyboards and knows where all the keys are and it just becomes more fluent.

✓ I never concentrated on improving my typing because I just kept typing, and my fingers just got used to the keyboard. I became familiar with the keys and now I'm more fluent.

原句时态和主谓不一致：前半句用一般现在“never concentrated”但后面描述应为过去持续动作，改为“kept typing”；“grow gross”表达不当，意思不明确，改为“got used to the keyboard”（变得习惯于键盘）。后半句“Familiar with the keyboards and knows where all the keys are”缺主语和动词时态，应改为完整句子“I became familiar...”。最后“it just becomes more fluent”中主语不明确且时态不当，改为“now I'm more fluent”使时态和主语一致。