打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be slightly more natural and expand with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking word to connect reason and example, and keep it within 3–4 brief sentences. Mention how typing helps your programming tasks for concreteness.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I do a lot of programming. For example, typing lets me write and test code quickly, and I can use shortcuts to be more efficient. Consequently, typing is much more practical for my work than handwriting.

建議: Answer more directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or which), then add a concise supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like "sit on my laptop" — describe using it. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I don't use a desktop; I usually type on my laptop. Although I don't type every single day, I use my laptop frequently for studying and coding, so I type several times a week.

建議: Provide a full-sentence response and add a brief supporting detail to make it more natural. Use a linking word to explain context or how you learned, e.g., through lessons or practice.

範例: I learned to type when I was eight years old. At that time, I took basic computer classes at school, and regular practice helped me improve my speed.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence about your main method of improvement, then give a specific example and result using a linking word. Explain what you practice and how often to show concrete effort.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with targeted exercises. For instance, I try drills to strengthen my left-hand typing because it's a challenge, and as a result I practise for about 20 minutes a day to increase accuracy.

× I like typing because I love to do programming and coding.

✓ I like typing because I love programming and coding.

The phrase 'love to do programming' is not incorrect but 'love programming' is more natural; the issue relates to verb+ -ing form usage and redundancy. Use 'love programming' or 'like to program' for conciseness and correct verbform pairing.

× Not every day specifically, but I do sit on my laptop frequently.

✓ Not every day specifically, but I do use my laptop frequently.

The verb 'sit on my laptop' is incorrect in meaning and collocationally odd. This is a present-tense usage issue: use 'use my laptop' or 'sit at my laptop' to describe habitual action. 'Use' is clearer; if emphasizing location, 'sit at my laptop' is correct.

× Since I was 8 years old.

✓ I learned when I was 8 years old.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb, falling under sentence structure errors. To answer 'When did you learn how to type?', provide a full clause such as 'I learned when I was 8 years old' or 'I have been typing since I was 8 years old.' Choose simple past 'learned' to match the question 'When did you learn?'.

× By learning new ways to type, like typing with my left hand, which actually a challenge for me.

✓ By learning new ways to type, like typing with my left hand, which is actually a challenge for me.

This sentence omits the verb 'is' before 'actually a challenge,' creating an incomplete clause. The error concerns verb+ -ing form and missing verb in the relative clause; insert 'is' to form 'which is actually a challenge for me.' Also ensure parallelism with 'learning' and 'typing.'