打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 用更自然和语法正确的句子直接回答问题，避免重复和非正式表达。改进要点：1) 开头一句直接表明偏好；2) 用正确的语法（例如 "my handwriting sucks" 改为 "my handwriting is poor"）；3) 用一到两个具体理由支持观点并用连接词衔接；4) 控制在最多五句内。

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is quite poor and typing is more convenient. Also, typing lets me work faster and makes it easier to edit documents. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and share files electronically, which saves time.

建議: 回答时要直接说明习惯并给出具体原因，避免笼统或重复表述。改进要点：1) 一句陈述日常使用的设备；2) 用一两个具体理由支持（如便携性、性能）；3) 用连接词使句子流畅；4) 避免语气词和含糊表述。

範例: I usually type on my laptop every day because it is portable and powerful enough for my tasks. For instance, I can work in different places and run the software I need, which is especially useful in the current AI-driven environment.

建議: 回答应更清晰地说明时间并用正确时态和更自然的表达。改进要点：1) 开门见山说出学会的时间点；2) 用一两句说明学习的情境或方式；3) 注意语法（例如过去时和非限定动词顺序）；4) 保持简洁。

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We even had a typing test at that time, so I practiced regularly and became comfortable using the keyboard.

建議: 回答时要结构清晰，说明方法并给出具体细节或例子。改进要点：1) 用主题句说明主要方式（每天练习等）；2) 补充具体细节（练习内容、时长或工具）；3) 避免冗长重复，注意语法和人称一致；4) 保持最多五句。

範例: I improved my typing by practicing every day after school, usually for about 30 minutes. Since I didn't have my own computer then, I borrowed my dad's laptop and he encouraged me to keep practicing, which helped me build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing actually because my handwriting is sucks and I think typing is more convenient that let me work more efficiency.

✓ I prefer typing, actually, because my handwriting is terrible and I think typing is more convenient and lets me work more efficiently.

原句中有多处错误： 1) “my handwriting is sucks” 中同时用了系动词 is 和动词 sucks，应使用形容词 “terrible” 或 “bad” 来描述名词（属于形容词/副词用法错误）。 2) “that let me work more efficiency” 结构不正确。应使用连接词 “and” 连接两个并列句，并且动词要用第三人称单数形式 “lets”；“efficiency” 是名词，应改为副词 “efficiently”。 建议：使用形容词描述名词，动词与主语在人称和数上一致（第三人称单数加 -s），以及用副词修饰动词。

× And also as a student we no longer write words in paper but we do it in COM.

✓ Also, as students, we no longer write words on paper but do it on computers.

原句中多处问题： 1) “as a student we” 在指代时单复数不一致，应改为复数 “as students, we” 或用单数并换主语。属于代词/代称使用不当。 2) “write words in paper” 介词使用错误，应为 “on paper”。 3) “in COM” 不明确，推测为 “computer(s)” 或 “on computers”。建议将缩写展开并用复数与前文一致。

× I usually type on my laptop keyboard for my daily work because I think laptop is more advanced than desktop.

✓ I usually type on my laptop keyboard for my daily work because I think a laptop is more advanced than a desktop.

原句缺少不定冠词。提到单个可数名词时需要使用冠词，所以应为 “a laptop” 和 “a desktop”。建议在英语中提到单数可数名词时注意冠词使用。

× Because many new technology is required in laptop and in the AI era I think uh, new technology is very important for everyone.

✓ Because many new technologies are required in laptops, and in the AI era I think new technology is very important for everyone.

原句中存在主谓和数的不一致问题： 1) “many new technology is” 中“many” 表示复数，名词应为复数 “technologies”，谓语应使用复数形式 “are”。 2) “in laptop” 应使用复数或冠词 “in laptops” 或 “in a laptop”。这里与前半句一致改为复数。建议保证量词（many）与名词数一致，谓语与主语在数上保持一致。

× I learned it in my primary school and I remembered that I have a test that line with typing in the keyboard, so I knew it how to use it now.

✓ I learned it in primary school and I remember that I had a test related to typing on the keyboard, so now I know how to use it.

原句时态和表达混乱： 1) “I remembered that I have a test” 时态不一致，应为过去发生的事 “I remember” 或 “I remembered” 配合过去时 “I had a test”。这里改为一般现在时 “I remember” 更自然，或将全部改为过去时。 2) “that line with typing” 用词错误，改为 “related to typing”。 3) “in the keyboard” 介词使用错误，应为 “on the keyboard”。 4) “so I knew it how to use it now” 语序和时态错误，改为 “so now I know how to use it”。 建议：理清叙述时点，保持时态一致，注意介词搭配和正确的词序。

× Because for preparing my typing task, I practiced it every day after school and because I didn't have my own computer in that time.

✓ To prepare for my typing tasks, I practiced every day after school because I didn't have my own computer at that time.

原句中动名词和介词短语使用不当： 1) “Because for preparing” 是冗余的，正确表达为 “To prepare for” 或 “For preparing” 但更自然是 “To prepare for”。 2) “my typing task” 若指多次练习应使用复数 “typing tasks”。 3) “in that time” 介词错误，应为 “at that time”。 建议：使用不定式短语表示目的（to prepare for...），注意时间介词用法。

× So I borrowed from my dad and he's very supporting me.

✓ So I borrowed one from my dad, and he was very supportive of me.

原句代词和形容词使用错误： 1) “I borrowed from my dad” 缺少宾语，应明确借的东西：例如 “borrowed one” 或 “borrowed a computer”。 2) “he's very supporting me” 用法不自然，应该用形容词 “supportive” 并搭配介词 “of” 或用动词短语 “he supported me”。 建议：在使用 borrow 时明确宾语；描述人态度时用形容词 supportive，或直接用动词短语。