打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接并遵循结构：先给出明确立场，然后用具体、相关的支持细节解释原因，避免重复填充词（例如“you know”，“maybe”）。同时控制在最多5句内，使用连接词使句子更连贯（例如“because”，“so”，“however”）。可以补充对字迹、记忆或速度的具体比较。

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me write much faster and remember ideas more clearly. For example, writing by hand allows me to sketch quick notes and mnemonic marks, so I can draft 100 words in about two or three minutes. In contrast, typing feels slower for me because I often hesitate on key positions and need more time to correct errors.

建議: 答案应更自然并减少情绪化和重复。先直接回答，然后用一到两句说明原因并举例。避免无意义的抱怨和口语填充词，使用更合适的词汇（例如“regularly”，“assignments”）。

範例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I often have to submit written assignments as an undergraduate. For example, I usually type essays and reports in the evenings, so my laptop has become essential for finishing coursework on time.

建議: 回答结构清晰但可更简洁直接。给出一个清晰的时间框架（e.g. “in primary school”），接着用具体细节支撑，如课程内容或记忆的练习方式，使用连接词提升流畅性并删除口语填充。

範例: I learned to type in primary school when we had regular computer lessons. For instance, our teacher gave us two or three classes each term and we practised typing with a simple game that helped us learn key positions and improve speed.

建議: 回答要更具体，展示主动学习或练习的方法，而不是模糊的“日常使用”。可以提到具体练习（在线打字练习、定时练习、正确手形）并用连接词说明效果。删去犹豫和填充词，控制句子数。

範例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice and a few targeted exercises. For example, I use online typing tests for 10 minutes a day to increase speed and practice proper finger placement, and I also time myself when writing essays to build accuracy under pressure.

× ...remembering the exact positions of every letter is difficult for me, so I always take about maybe 10 minutes to type 100 words.

✓ ...remembering the exact position of every letter is difficult for me, so I always take about maybe 10 minutes to type 100 words.

句中“positions”与“every letter”搭配不当。短语“every + 单数名词”后续应使用单数形式，因此应改为“position”。建议把握“every + 单数名词”结构，后面用单数或视为整体含义的不可数表达。

× As an undergraduate in colleges, we need to write essays almost every day.

✓ As undergraduates in college, we need to write essays almost every day.

原句中“an undergraduate”与主语“we”不一致，且“in colleges/college”用法不当。这里表达应为复数身份“undergraduates”，并通常说“in college”指大学生活。错误类型按“动名词/形式”列表中更接近数一致，此处归入动词-ing类别要求保持结构一致。建议注意主语与身份描述的一致性，使用复数或改为“I as an undergraduate”。

× I don't remember the exact time, maybe during my primary school, because, you know, in primary school students often have two or three computer lessons to teach us those basic knowledge about computers.

✓ I don't remember the exact time, maybe during primary school, because, you know, in primary school students often have two or three computer lessons to teach us that basic knowledge about computers.

“during my primary school” 英语习惯说法是“during primary school”或“when I was in primary school”。此外“those basic knowledge”中“knowledge”为不可数名词，不应使用复数指示代词“those”，应改为“that basic knowledge”。建议熟悉不可数名词用法，和固定搭配“during primary school / when I was in primary school”。

× And I still remember there was a game in our school's computer that we could practice typing every class.

✓ And I still remember there was a game on our school's computer that we could use to practice typing in every class.

介词使用不当，“a game in our school's computer”应为“on our school's computer”。此外“practice typing every class” 更自然为“practice typing in every class”或“during every class”。建议注意电子设备上的内容用“on”，并把活动发生的时间用“in/during + class”。

× I don't do something special to improve my typing.

✓ I don't do anything special to improve my typing.

“do something special”在否定句中应使用“anything”而不是“something”。这是与动词形式相关的否定句用词习惯错误，改为“anything”。建议记住否定句中“something”通常改为“anything”。

× I always enhance my typing skills by everyday things like, you know, chatting with my best friends on WeChat, writing my essays or study tasks or, uh, just.

✓ I always improve my typing skills through everyday activities like chatting with my best friends on WeChat, writing my essays or study tasks, etc.

句中“enhance my typing skills by everyday things like ...” 用法不自然。“enhance by”搭配不当，且“things”应更具体为“activities”，句尾“or, uh, just”不完整。建议用“improve ... through everyday activities like ...”并补全或省略不完整项，保持句子完整性。