打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type very quickly. For example, I can finish notes for a lecture in half the time, which helps me study more efficiently.

建議: Start with a clear answer (desktop or laptop), fix vocabulary (keyboard, touchscreen), and give one short reason with a linking word. Remove filler and correct tense/word order.

範例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard because I find the keys more comfortable to touch. Also, I don't have a laptop at the moment, so I use the desktop for most of my work.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence stating when, then add one specific reason or brief detail. Improve grammar (learned how to type, it was necessary) and use a linking word to connect reason.

範例: I learned how to type when I was in elementary school. My parents thought it would be useful in the future, so I practiced regularly and gradually increased my speed.

建議: Answer in present or past consistently, be specific about the method and its benefit, avoid repetition, and use linking words to explain why it helped. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I improved my typing as a child by playing online typing games, which made practice fun and helped me build speed and accuracy. Because the games were engaging, I practiced regularly without getting bored.

× I prefer writing to handwriting because I can type very fast and it takes more time if I use pen to write on papers and I like to typing.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type very fast, and it takes more time if I use a pen to write on paper, and I like typing.

Error type 8: incorrect verb + -ing usage and redundancy. 'Prefer writing to handwriting' is awkward; 'typing' (verb + -ing) matches the contrast. 'I like to typing' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'I like typing' or 'I like to type'. Also use singular 'a pen' and uncountable 'paper'. Combine clauses and add commas for clarity.

× I usually type on the typeboard because the touching on typeboard is more comfortable for me and also I don't have laptop now and I usually use.

✓ I usually type on the keyboard because the feel of the keyboard is more comfortable for me, and I don't have a laptop now.

Error type 22/11: incorrect noun choice and article use. 'Typeboard' is not standard; use 'keyboard'. 'The touching on typeboard' is ungrammatical; use 'the feel of the keyboard' or 'the keys are more comfortable'. Also add article 'a laptop'. The trailing 'and I usually use' is incomplete and removed to fix sentence structure (type 23/26).

× I learned how to type keyboard when I was in elementary school because my parents thought it is necessary to type for me in the future, so I practiced a lot to type quickly.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school because my parents thought it would be necessary for me in the future, so I practiced a lot to improve my speed.

Error type 26 and 6/5: missing preposition 'on' before 'a keyboard' (type 11). Tense/modal issue: 'thought it is necessary to type for me in the future' should be 'thought it would be necessary for me in the future' to match past reporting. 'Practice to type quickly' is awkward; use 'practiced a lot to improve my speed' or 'to type quickly'. Use 'for me' repositioned to 'necessary for me'.

× I did some games of typing to improve my skills when I was little because I I can practice a lot because it's so interesting and it's not boring.

✓ I played some typing games to improve my skills when I was little because I could practice a lot; they were very interesting and not boring.

Error type 8 and 26: 'did some games of typing' is unidiomatic; use 'played typing games'. Tense consistency: 'I can practice' should be past 'I could practice' to match 'when I was little'. Removed duplicate 'I'. Reworded final clause to avoid repetition and improve coherence.