打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi nhỏ. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: nhanh hơn, dễ chỉnh sửa, lưu trữ điện tử). Hạn chế độ dài dưới 5 câu và không dùng từ thừa như “con convenient”.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit text quickly and save documents in the cloud, so I can access them from anywhere.

建議: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng nên kết hợp vào một câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm một lý do ngắn để làm câu trả lời phong phú (ví dụ: portable, built-in battery). Tránh sai chính tả (‘everyday’ -> ‘every day’ khi là trạng từ).

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day; I use my MacBook because it is portable and has a comfortable keyboard for long typing sessions.

建議: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu để có chủ ngữ và động từ rõ ràng ở đầu câu. Cân nhắc gộp thông tin ngắn gọn và cụ thể (thời điểm, nơi, lý do). Tránh lặp ý (learn/learned).

範例: I learned to type when I was six at primary school because it was part of the curriculum; my teacher emphasized that typing is an important skill for the future.

建議: Giảm lặp từ, sửa lỗi lắp lời và làm câu mạch lạc với các liên từ. Nên đưa ra phương pháp cụ thể (luyện gõ mù, bài tập tốc độ, ứng dụng) và nêu kết quả cải thiện. Tránh nói quá chung chung như “I type every day” lặp lại nhiều lần.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing touch-typing every day without looking at the keyboard and using online typing tests to track my speed. I also watch tutorial videos on YouTube to learn techniques and exercises, which have helped me increase my accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing because of its con convenient and it's easy to use and I could type it anywhere with just my computer.

✓ I prefer typing because it is convenient and easy to use, and I can type anywhere with just my computer.

The sentence has incorrect word choice and modal verb form. 'con convenient' appears to be a typo; use 'convenient' (adjective) and 'easy to use' (adjective phrase) to describe typing. Use 'can' instead of 'could' to express present ability. Also combine clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: remove typos, keep present simple for general preferences, and use 'can' for present ability.

× I type on a laptop keyboard everyday. It is my MacBook.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day. It is my MacBook.

Two issues: 'everyday' (one word) is an adjective meaning 'ordinary', while the adverb phrase 'every day' (two words) should be used to indicate frequency. The rest is fine. Suggestion: use 'every day' to show frequency.

× Learn how to type on a keyboard when I was six years old in my school, in my primary school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was six years old at my primary school.

The original sentence lacks a subject and mixes prepositions. Use past simple 'I learned' for a past event. Use 'at my primary school' to indicate location. Avoid repeating 'in my school' and 'in my primary school'. Suggestion: always include subject and correct preposition for place.

× I learned it because it is our subject in my class and it is very important, as my teacher said, to learn how to write or how to type on a keyboard.

✓ I learned it because it was a subject in my class and it was very important, as my teacher said, to learn how to write and how to type on a keyboard.

Tense consistency: the learning happened in the past, so use past tense 'was' instead of 'is'. Also use 'and' instead of 'or' to indicate both writing and typing. 'Our subject in my class' is awkward; 'a subject in my class' is clearer. Suggestion: keep past tense and use parallel structure.

× I type every day and when I type I I don't see the the type the keyboard. I just see my screen to learn how to type without seeing the keyboard and I type every day.

✓ I type every day, and when I type I don't look at the keyboard. I just look at my screen to practice typing without looking at the keyboard.

Remove repeated words ('I I', 'the the', 'type the keyboard') and use correct verbs: 'look at the keyboard' not 'see the keyboard'. Use 'practice typing' to express improvement. Keep present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use collocations like 'look at' and 'practice typing'.

× I type as a habit and also I work. I go to YouTube to learn new tips and information about typing.

✓ Typing is a habit for me, and I also practice at work. I go to YouTube to learn new tips and information about typing.

'I type as a habit' is awkward; 'Typing is a habit for me' is clearer. 'I also I work' unclear; interpret as practicing at work so use 'I also practice at work' or 'I also type at work'. Maintain present simple for routines. Suggestion: use clear subject and verb phrases and ensure parallel structure.