打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more coherent and avoid sentence fragments. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "by hand", "because it's more convenient", "take notes") and avoid redundancy.

範例: I prefer typing because it's faster and makes editing easy. For example, I usually type essays and emails on my laptop, which lets me quickly correct mistakes. However, I sometimes write by hand when studying because it's more convenient for taking quick notes.

建議: Good clear response—keep it concise and add one specific example to strengthen it. Use linking words to connect reason and result (e.g., "therefore", "so").

範例: Yes, I use my desktop almost every day because I need to write essays and research for my courses, so I type quickly without looking at the keyboard. For example, last week I finished a 2,000-word assignment in one evening because of my typing speed.

建議: Fix grammar and sentence boundaries, avoid fragments. Combine linked ideas and be specific about outcomes. Replace incorrect words ("Improve" -> "improved", "tie" -> "type") and keep answer under five sentences.

範例: I learned to type at about 10 years old during IT lessons, where the teacher showed us proper finger placement and exercises. After class, I played typing games online to practise, which improved my speed, so now I can type reasonably fast for writing essays.

建議: Correct word choice and tense ("repairing" -> "preparing"). Be specific about methods and frequency, and use connectors like "also" or "in addition" to link points. Keep it concise and natural.

範例: I prepare for exams by practising typing essays on my laptop every day to build speed and accuracy. In addition, I play typing games online to develop the correct use of all ten fingers, which has noticeably improved my accuracy.

× However, I also often write by hands while studying because.

✓ However, I also often write by hand while studying.

The phrase 'by hands' is ungrammatical; the correct idiom is 'by hand' (singular). Also the sentence ended with 'because' without completing the clause, creating a sentence fragment. Combining into 'I also often write by hand while studying' fixes the fragment and uses the correct idiom. Suggestion: Use 'by hand' for writing with a pen/pencil and avoid leaving 'because' without a clause.

× More convenient and I can easily do take note.

✓ It is more convenient, and I can easily take notes.

This original line is a fragment and contains word order errors: 'More convenient' lacks a subject and verb; 'do take note' is incorrect collocation and singular 'note' should be plural when meaning notes. The corrected sentence adds the subject and verb 'It is', uses the coordinating conjunction 'and', and corrects to 'take notes.' Suggestion: Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb; use 'take notes' for making multiple notes.

× I can easily check the mistakes.

✓ I can easily check my mistakes.

While not strictly wrong, native usage prefers specifying the possessor with 'my mistakes' rather than the definite phrase 'the mistakes' in this context. This improves clarity and naturalness. Suggestion: Use possessive pronouns when referring to one's own mistakes.

× Well, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was about 10 at school.

✓ Well, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was about 10 at school.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is grammatical. Included here only to show no change is necessary. Suggestion: None.

× For example, after class I used to play typing games online which helped me. Improve my speed so now I can tie reasonably fast and it's really convenient for my essays writing.

✓ For example, after class I used to play typing games online, which helped me improve my speed, so now I can type reasonably fast and it's really convenient for my essay writing.

Original text has sentence fragments and punctuation errors: 'which helped me. Improve my speed' splits a clause incorrectly; 'tie' is a typo for 'type'; 'essays writing' is incorrect noun phrase order. The correction joins clauses properly with commas, fixes 'type', and changes 'essays writing' to 'essay writing' (or 'writing essays'). Suggestion: Avoid fragmenting clauses; proofread for typos like 'tie' vs 'type' and use correct noun phrase order 'essay writing' or 'writing essays'.

× Well, I have done several things to improve my typing speed and accuracy while repairing for my exams.

✓ Well, I have done several things to improve my typing speed and accuracy while preparing for my exams.

The verb 'repairing' is incorrect in this context; the intended verb is 'preparing.' This is a word choice error rather than tense, but it creates a semantic problem. 'Have done' (present perfect) fits because the actions were completed with relevance to the present. Suggestion: Use 'preparing' when referring to getting ready for exams; always check similar-looking words.

× I practice typing essays on my laptop to build speed and I also play some typing games online to learn about typing with all 10 fingers.

✓ I practice typing essays on my laptop to build speed, and I also play typing games online to learn to type with all 10 fingers.

Phrase 'play some typing games' is acceptable, but 'learn about typing with all 10 fingers' is awkward. Better is 'learn to type with all 10 fingers.' Use parallel infinitive forms for clarity: 'to build' and 'to learn.' Suggestion: Use 'learn to + verb' when describing acquiring a skill and keep parallel structure.