打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (so sánh: prefer A to B), lặp từ và câu quá dài. Nên mở đầu bằng câu trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với ví dụ cụ thể.

範例: I prefer typing on my laptop to handwriting because it's faster and more organized. For example, when I take lecture notes I can search and edit them later, which saves time and helps me study more efficiently.

建議: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; tránh nói lặp và thông tin không rõ ràng. Nên trả lời trực tiếp (laptop or desktop), giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

範例: I usually type on a laptop rather than a desktop because it's portable and convenient. Because I commute to university every day, being able to work anywhere is very helpful.

建議: Giảm tiếng lấp và sửa thì động từ; đưa ra thông tin cụ thể về thời điểm và hoàn cảnh học để rõ ràng hơn. Dùng một hoặc hai câu ngắn, mạch lạc, kèm ví dụ nếu cần.

範例: I started learning to type when I was in primary school in an IT class. The teacher showed us proper finger placement and gave practice exercises, which helped me improve quickly.

建議: Loại bỏ tiếng lấp và làm rõ phương pháp cụ thể; đưa ra ví dụ về bài tập hoặc công cụ hỗ trợ và kết quả mong muốn. Giữ câu ngắn và sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc.

範例: I practice typing for at least 30 minutes every day using online typing tests and exercises. For instance, I use a typing website to do drills that focus on accuracy and speed, and I track my progress weekly.

× Actually, I prefer typing on my laptop than writing on the notes because I think typing is more convenient and can help me to note the information which caught up with my thoughts.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing on my laptop to writing notes because I think typing is more convenient and helps me record information that keeps up with my thoughts.

The student used 'prefer ... than' which is incorrect; use 'prefer ... to' for comparisons (preposition). 'On the notes' is wrong; use 'writing notes' (no article). 'Can help me to note the information which caught up with my thoughts' is awkward: use 'helps me record information that keeps up with my thoughts' to match meaning and present tense consistency.

× While I frequently type on laptop then the desktops every day, you know the laptop is capable and you can bring be by yourself every day to go to school or go to work.

✓ I frequently type on my laptop rather than on desktops every day; the laptop is portable so you can bring it with you to school or work.

Use 'laptop' with an article 'my laptop' and compare with 'rather than' (conjunction). 'Capable' is incorrect for portability; use 'portable'. 'You can bring be by yourself' includes incorrect verb forms and pronouns; correct to 'you can bring it with you'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun usage.

× Well, I started learning how to type on a keyboard, seeing when I was very small, maybe when I'm attended to the primary school.

✓ Well, I started learning how to type on a keyboard when I was very young, maybe when I attended primary school.

Use past tense consistently: 'I started' and 'I attended' (not 'I'm attended'). 'Seeing' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Use 'very young' instead of 'very small' for age context. Remove extra commas.

× You know I have umm an IT subject and uh, which where the teacher teach me how to type on the keyboard.

✓ I had an IT class where the teacher taught me how to type on the keyboard.

Use past tense 'had' and 'taught' to match timing. 'An IT subject' is better as 'an IT class'. Remove redundant 'which where'. Subject-verb agreement: 'teacher teach' should be 'teacher taught'.

× You know, every day I've tried to spend at least 30 minutes to umm, improve my typing skills such as umm, typing umm, is it on my laptop or umm improve my typing skill faster.

✓ I try to spend at least 30 minutes every day improving my typing skills on my laptop to get faster.

Use simple present 'I try' for habitual actions (not 'I've tried'). Use gerund after 'spend ... improving'. Remove filler words. 'Improve my typing skill faster' is awkward; use 'to get faster' or 'to improve my speed'. Ensure concise, grammatically correct structure.