打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on fluency and accuracy: correct minor grammar and word-choice errors, avoid redundancy, and keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. For example, replace “net journaling” with “personal journaling” and “handwriting thing” with “handwriting.”

範例: I prefer typing for professional tasks but handwriting for personal journaling. For work I always type because it’s faster and easier to edit, whereas handwriting feels more relaxing and helps me concentrate when studying.

建議: Clarify unclear phrases and fix grammar: avoid unrelated or confusing fragments (e.g., “after driving”). Use linking words to connect ideas and provide one clear supporting detail. Keep answers coherent and concise.

範例: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day for work. Most of my research and writing are done on the computer, which is much faster and makes editing easier than handwriting.

建議: Improve grammar and specificity: correct tense and article use, and give a brief, concrete detail about how you learned (e.g., course name or practice routine). Avoid vague or awkward phrases like “typing cards.”

範例: I learned to type properly at university when I took an introductory computer skills course. The course taught touch-typing techniques, and I practiced for 15–20 minutes daily to build speed and accuracy.

建議: Correct vocabulary and grammar, and be specific about the methods and frequency. Replace incorrect words (e.g., “speak,” “friend,” “radio typing”) with suitable terms like “speed,” “friendly,” and “traditional typing exercises.” Use linking words and give one concrete example of an app or routine.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing with online typing games and apps to increase my speed and accuracy. For example, I use TypingClub for 20 minutes a day because it’s user-friendly and tracks my progress over time, which keeps me motivated.

× Honestly I it depends on the situation.

✓ Honestly, it depends on the situation.

Extra pronoun 'I' causes a sentence structure error by producing an unnecessary subject; remove 'I' so 'it' correctly refers to the situation. Also add a comma after 'Honestly' for natural phrasing.

× but for net journaling or studying I prefer handwriting thing.

✓ but for note journaling or studying I prefer handwriting.

The phrase 'handwriting thing' is unidiomatic; use the noun 'handwriting' alone. 'Net' seems to be a typo for 'note' or 'notetaking'; context suggests 'note journaling' or 'note-taking'. Also add a comma before 'I' is optional—kept concise.

× Most of my research I've done on the computer and after driving.

✓ Most of my research I do on the computer because it is much faster and easier to edit than writing by hand.

Original mixes tenses and includes 'after driving' which makes no sense here. The student likely meant a reason: typing is faster and easier to edit. Use present simple 'I do' to match daily habit and provide clear cause with 'because'.

× I actually learned how to type properly in university.

✓ I actually learned how to type properly at university.

Preposition 'in university' is not incorrect in some varieties, but 'at university' is the standard collocation in English when referring to attending university. The tense 'learned' is correct for a past event; only the preposition needed adjustment.

× I thought if I use all my fingers on keyboard it will look perfect.

✓ I thought if I used all my fingers on the keyboard it would look perfect.

This conditional describes a past thought about a hypothetical situation, so use the past tense in both clauses (second conditional for past-in-reported thoughts): 'if I used' and 'it would'. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard'.

× So I took an online typing cards to improve my skills.

✓ So I took an online typing course to improve my skills.

'Typing cards' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'course' or 'class'. Use the singular countable noun 'course' with the article 'an' is correct. This fixes the lexical error.

× I often use online typing games or apps to improve my speak and accuracy.

✓ I often use online typing games or apps to improve my speed and accuracy.

The word 'speak' is incorrect in this context; 'speed' fits typing. This is a lexical/quantifier-type error where the wrong noun was used. 'Speed and accuracy' is the standard collocation.

× They're much more friend and motivating than just radio typing, and many of them lets you track your progress over time, which is really helpful.

✓ They're much more fun and motivating than just rote typing, and many of them let you track your progress over time, which is really helpful.

Multiple errors: 'friend' is the wrong word—should be 'fun' (adjective). 'Radio typing' is likely a mistaken phrase; 'rote typing' (repetitive practice) fits the contrast. Subject-verb agreement: 'many of them let' not 'lets'. Fix both the adjective choice and the verb form to match plural subject.