打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammar slips (e.g., "by your hand" → "handwriting", "beautiful organized" → "neatly organized").

範例: I prefer typing. Firstly, it's faster, so I can finish tasks more quickly. Secondly, typed notes look neater and are easier to edit, which helps me study more effectively.

建議: Use a clear topic sentence and correct small errors. Combine details with a linking word (e.g., "although" or "because") and avoid filler words. Fix contractions and word order ("I it's very rare" → "It's very rare").

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I do my homework and write on my laptop every day. Although I sometimes use a desktop keyboard, that's only when I help teachers at school.

建議: Provide a clearer timeline and avoid vague phrasing. Start with a direct answer, then give a concise explanation with linking words. Remove redundant phrases and correct small errors ("a my laptop" → "a laptop").

範例: I didn't take formal typing lessons; I taught myself. When I was a child my parents bought me a laptop, and by using it regularly I gradually learned to type faster and more accurately.

建議: Answer directly and add one or two specific details about how you use the site or other methods. Use linking words like "for example" and avoid vague phrasing like "on Safari" (mention the website name and how it helps).

範例: I practice on a website called Monkeytype to improve my speed and accuracy. For example, I do daily 10-minute drills and focus on reducing errors, which has noticeably increased my words-per-minute.

× I prefer typing because when you write by your hand, you should pay attention to the lines your handwriting and keep your notebook clear and beautiful organized, while typing is more, way more.

✓ I prefer typing because when you write by hand, you should pay attention to the lines, your handwriting, and keep your notebook clear and beautifully organized, while typing is much easier.

Errors include incorrect phrase 'by your hand' (preposition use and phrasing), missing commas and conjunctions, and incorrect adjective/adverb use 'beautiful organized'. According to the list, the relevant issue is Verb in the present participle form as 'beautifully' is the correct adverb to modify 'organized'. Fixes: use 'by hand' not 'by your hand', add commas to separate items, add 'and' before the final verb, change 'beautiful organized' to 'beautifully organized', and replace 'more, way more' with 'much easier' for natural comparison.

× I always use my laptop keyboard to type whenever I'm doing my homework or writing something. I it's very rare when I use a desktop keyboard, for example when I'm helping teachers at school.

✓ I always use my laptop keyboard to type whenever I'm doing my homework or writing something. It's very rare for me to use a desktop keyboard, for example when I'm helping teachers at school.

Original has an extra pronoun and incorrect construction 'I it's' and awkward phrasing 'very rare when I use'. This is a pronoun and sentence structure error. Fixes: remove the extra 'I', start the sentence 'It's very rare for me to use...', which correctly uses the dummy subject 'it' and the pronoun 'me' as object.

× I never really learned how to type on a keyboard. When I was a kid my parents bought me a my laptop and since then I'm just using my laptop, doing something and learning.

✓ I never really learned how to type on a keyboard. When I was a kid my parents bought me a laptop, and since then I've just been using it, doing things and learning.

Problems: extra 'a' before 'my laptop', incorrect continuous tense sequence 'since then I'm just using' should be present perfect continuous to show an action continuing from the past. This is a past tense/tense consistency issue. Fixes: remove redundant article, use 'I've just been using it' for continuity, change 'doing something' to 'doing things' for natural phrasing.

× It's just that question of experience.

✓ It's just a matter of experience.

Phrase 'that question of experience' is unnatural and a sentence structure error. The correct idiom is 'a matter of experience.' Use 'a matter of' to express that something depends on experience.

× Oh, there is a site on Safari named Monkey type on which we can practice to type faster.

✓ Oh, there's a site on Safari called Monkeytype where we can practice typing faster.

Issues: 'on Safari named' is awkward and 'practice to type' is incorrect collocation. This is a preposition and collocation issue. Use 'on Safari called Monkeytype' or 'a site called Monkeytype on Safari', and use the gerund 'practice typing' rather than 'practice to type'. Also combine 'Monkey type' into 'Monkeytype' if that is the site name.