打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, avoid fillers (uh), and use one clear reason followed by a supporting detail. Use linking words to connect points (for example, 'first' and 'second').

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing. First, writing by hand helps me concentrate better because it reduces distractions from notifications. Second, I enjoy using attractive stationery, which makes the process more enjoyable.

建議: Remove repetition and start with a direct topic sentence. Provide a brief reason and one specific detail about convenience. Keep it within three sentences and avoid filler words.

範例: I usually type on a laptop every day. As a machine learning engineer, I find my laptop more convenient for moving between meetings and working remotely. It’s also more comfortable than my desktop.

建議: Give a clear time reference and add one specific example of how you learned (e.g., games, lessons). Avoid vague phrases like 'every other thing.'

範例: I learned to type when I was in third grade after my dad bought our first desktop PC. I practised by playing typing games and helping with simple tasks, which helped me build speed and confidence.

建議: Avoid absolute statements like 'only one way.' Be specific about methods and name an app or technique, and finish the sentence. Remove filler words and keep it coherent.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online tools such as TypingClub or Keybr. Practising for 15–20 minutes daily and focusing on accuracy before speed helped me improve quickly.

× I favour handwriting over typing uh, mainly because it helps me concentrate better uh, in whatever I'm doing, and secondly, I love to use beautiful stationery while I'm working, so I prefer handwriting more.

✓ I favour handwriting over typing, mainly because it helps me concentrate better in whatever I'm doing, and secondly, I love using beautiful stationery while I'm working, so I prefer handwriting.

This sentence has redundancy and awkward quantifier/word choice: 'prefer handwriting more' is redundant after 'favour handwriting over typing' — use 'prefer handwriting' or 'favour handwriting'. 'Love to use' is acceptable but 'love using' is more natural here. Removed filler 'uh' and extra commas for clarity. Suggestions: avoid redundant comparatives ('more' after 'prefer'), reduce fillers, and use consistent verb forms with gerunds after 'love'.

× So I'm a machine learning engineer. I I usually work on my laptop, it's just more convenient for me. I don't use my PC system that often, I prefer my laptop, it's more comfortable.

✓ So I'm a machine learning engineer. I usually work on my laptop; it's just more convenient for me. I don't use my PC that often; I prefer my laptop because it's more comfortable.

Problems include repetition 'I I' and run-on sentences. 'PC system' is wordy; 'PC' suffices. Use semicolons or separate sentences to fix run-on. No third-person singular verb errors, but punctuation and word choice corrected. Suggestions: eliminate repeated words, avoid run-ons by using proper punctuation, and use concise nouns ('PC').

× My dad bought my first desktop PC system when I was in 3rd grade, so since then I've been using PC and experimenting with typing and every other thing.

✓ My dad bought my first desktop PC when I was in 3rd grade, so since then I've been using a PC and experimenting with typing and other things.

Errors: missing article before PC ('a PC'), awkward phrase 'every other thing' should be 'other things'. Tense choice 'since then I've been using' is correct (present perfect continuous). Suggestions: include appropriate articles before countable nouns and use natural plural forms ('other things').

× I believe there is only one way to improve your typing speed and accuracy. It's just by practicing more. There are certain application one can use to practice, uh typing, and that just helps a lot. I have used that when I was learning to use my.

✓ I believe there is only one way to improve your typing speed and accuracy: by practising more. There are certain applications one can use to practice typing, and that helps a lot. I used them when I was learning to type.

Problems: 'application' should be plural 'applications' to match 'certain', missing article or plural. 'It's just by practicing more' is awkward — use colon and gerund 'by practising more'. 'Practice, uh typing' had filler and comma misuse. Final sentence incomplete and awkward: 'I have used that when I was learning to use my.' corrected to 'I used them when I was learning to type.' Also changed present perfect to simple past ('used') to match 'when I was'. Suggestions: ensure agreement between quantifiers and nouns, avoid fillers, complete sentences, match tense consistency, and use correct verb forms ('learn to type').