打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: state preference in one sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unrelated words. Pronunciation/grammar: use correct verb forms (prefer typing), articles, and avoid filler words.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit documents and send messages, which saves me time and helps me stay organized.

建議: Answer directly (which device), then add a brief reason with linking words. Remove repeated phrases and unnecessary details. Use simple, correct sentences and correct device names (desktop or laptop).

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I study for the IELTS and complete reading and writing exercises online. As a result, I use the laptop to type assignments and practice tests daily.

建議: Start with a clear time reference, then give a concise reason. Use correct tense and remove repeated words. Use linking words like 'because' appropriately and keep it to 1–2 supporting sentences.

範例: I learned to type when I was in ninth grade because we had computer science lessons then. Consequently, I used the keyboard to complete most of my classwork and became more confident typing.

建議: Give a clear method: state specific activities or tools you use, and explain briefly how they help using linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid repeating words and unclear references (e.g., 'CD eyes reading').

範例: I improve my typing by practicing online typing lessons and doing timed typing exercises on my laptop and phone. For example, I use a typing website to increase my speed and accuracy, and regular practice helps me type more fluently.

× I'm mostly proud of in this modern era.

✓ I am grateful to live in this modern era.

Original sentence misuses the pronoun structure and the verb 'proud of' with no clear subject or object. The student likely meant they appreciate or are grateful for the modern era. Use a subject + verb + complement structure: 'I am grateful to live in this modern era.' This fixes the incomplete phrase and clarifies meaning.

× I mostly prefer to typing because it is easy to type and send message.

✓ I mostly prefer typing because it is easy to type and send messages.

'Prefer' is normally followed by the gerund (verb+ing) or 'to' + base verb, but not 'to typing.' Use 'prefer typing' or 'prefer to type.' Also 'message' should be plural 'messages' in general statements. Keep verb forms consistent.

× Anyone.

✓ Anyone can do it.

Single-word response 'Anyone.' is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. To express the likely idea that anyone can do typing, provide a full clause such as 'Anyone can do it.' This supplies a subject, modal/verb, and object.

× Yes definitely.

✓ Yes, definitely.

This is punctuation/format rather than third-person verb error; however keep 'Yes, definitely.' with a comma. No subject-verb present, but acceptable as a short answer. Correction adds proper punctuation.

× I am a student of IELTS and I and I practice a CDCD IELTS reading.

✓ I am an IELTS student and I practice IELTS reading regularly.

Original repeats 'I and I' and includes 'a CDCD' which appears to be a typo. Use 'an IELTS student' (vowel sound requires 'an') and simplify to 'I practice IELTS reading regularly.' Remove repetition and unclear fragments.

× That's why I type on on keyboard every day.

✓ That's why I type on the keyboard every day.

Duplicate 'on' is a typographical error. In general statements about a specific device you use daily, include the definite article 'the keyboard.' Corrects article use and removes repetition.

× I learned in my 9th class how to type on a keyboard because I because whenever I attending my computer science class that time I only only completed my work with the help of keyboard.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in my ninth grade because whenever I attended my computer science class, I could only complete my work with the help of the keyboard.

Several tense and form problems: 'learned' is correct past but 'in my 9th class' should be 'in my ninth grade' or 'when I was in class 9.' Remove duplicated 'because' and fix 'attending' to past 'attended.' 'Only only' duplicate removed. Add modal/ability 'could' to show past ability. Include article 'the keyboard.' These changes correct past-tense consistency, articles, and remove repetition.

× I am improve my typing with the help of mobile phone and laptop like I am a student of IELTS.

✓ I improve my typing with the help of my mobile phone and laptop because I am an IELTS student.

'I am improve' mixes present continuous and base verb incorrectly; use simple present 'I improve' or present continuous 'I am improving.' Add possessive 'my mobile phone' and article 'an IELTS student.' Replace 'like' with 'because' to show reason. This fixes verb tense/form and article/pronoun usage.

× Recently my class recently recently I practicing CD eyes reading and it also helps me to improve my typing.

✓ Recently, in my class, I have been practicing IELTS reading and it has also helped me improve my typing.

Original has repeated 'recently' and incorrect verb forms 'I practicing.' Use present perfect continuous 'have been practicing' to indicate an action continuing into the present. 'CD eyes reading' appears to be a typo for 'IELTS reading.' Use 'has also helped me improve' to show present result. Remove repetition and correct noun.