打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변을 더 자연스럽고 정확하게 만들기 위해 문법 오류를 고치고, 간결한 주제문 뒤에 구체적인 이유와 간단한 비교를 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어 ‘more good’ 대신 ‘better’를 쓰고, ‘because’로 시작하는 이유문장을 하나로 묶어 명확히 표현하세요. 또한 문장 수를 2~3문장으로 제한해 중복을 피하세요.

範例: I prefer typing because I’m comfortable with devices like laptops and tablets. However, handwriting is better when sending a personal letter because it feels more thoughtful and intimate.

建議: 문법(복수/단수, 관사)과 어순을 바로잡고 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 주제문으로 간단히 빈도를 말한 뒤, ‘because’를 이용해 구체적인 이유(과제 유형과 빈도)를 덧붙이세요. 예: ‘I’m a high school student’로 수정하고 ‘notebook’ 대신 ‘laptop’ 혹은 ‘computer’을 사용하세요.

範例: I don’t type every day, but I use a laptop or desktop quite often because I’m a high school student and I need to write essays and reports for many of my classes.

建議: 시간 표현과 중복 표현을 정리하세요. ‘since’는 시작 시점을 말할 때 쓰이므로 ‘when’ 질문에는 ‘when I was in elementary school’처럼 표현하는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 불필요한 반복(‘fam famous’)을 피하고 게임의 이름이나 간단한 설명을 덧붙이면 구체성이 높아집니다.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school because many children there played a popular typing game that helped us practice keyboard skills.

建議: 자신의 현재 상태를 솔직히 말한 뒤 개선 방법을 구체적으로 기술하세요. 문법(‘typing a keyboard’ → ‘typing on the keyboard’, ‘I wrote’ → ‘I write’ 또는 ‘I have written’)과 복수표현, 어순을 고치고 연습 방법(예: 연습 프로그램, 타이핑 게임, 속도 연습)을 포함하세요.

範例: I’m not very fast at typing, so I’m working to improve by practicing daily with online typing exercises and by writing essays for school, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because I am familiar with media devices such as notebook or tablets.

✓ I prefer typing because I am familiar with media devices such as notebooks or tablets.

'Notebook' should be plural to match 'tablets' and to correctly refer to the general category; use consistent plural form for items in a list. Suggestion: Make both nouns plural when referring to device types (notebooks, tablets).

× However, when we give someone a letter, I think handwriting is more good than typing.

✓ However, when we give someone a letter, I think handwriting is better than typing.

'More good' is ungrammatical in English; 'better' is the correct comparative form of 'good'. Suggestion: Use 'better' instead of 'more good' for comparisons.

× Not every day, but I use the desktop or laptop pretty much because I am a high school students and in high school there is a lot of things to do with notebook such as writing an essay or writing a report about the we learn.

✓ Not every day, but I use a desktop or laptop quite often because I am a high school student and in high school there are a lot of things to do with notebooks such as writing essays or writing reports about what we learn.

Multiple errors: 'students' should be singular to agree with 'I' (subject-verb/pronoun agreement), 'a desktop or laptop' is more natural, 'pretty much' is informal and 'quite often' fits better, 'there is' should be 'there are' to match plural 'things', 'notebook' should be plural 'notebooks', 'an essay' vs plural consistency, and 'the we learn' is incorrect phrasing and should be 'what we learn'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-pronoun agreement, use plural verbs with plural nouns, and use 'what we learn' for the content learned.

× I learned typing since I was like, since I was elementary school, because in Korea there is a typing game, a famous typing game, and it's very fam famous to elementary school students.

✓ I learned to type when I was in elementary school because in Korea there is a typing game, a famous one, and it's very famous among elementary school students.

Use 'learned to type' (infinitive) rather than 'learned typing', and 'since I was' with a time point is incorrect; use 'when I was in elementary school'. Remove repetition 'fam famous'. Suggestion: Use 'learned to + verb' for acquiring skills and 'when' + noun phrase for past time; avoid repetitions.

× Actually, I'm not good at typing a keyboard, so I am improving my typing skill right now.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at typing on a keyboard, so I am improving my typing skills right now.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'typing on a keyboard'. 'Typing skill' is usually pluralized as 'typing skills' when referring to overall ability. Suggestion: Use 'typing on a keyboard' and 'typing skills'.

× I wrote a lot of essays in the reports and yes, that kinds of efforts.

✓ I have written a lot of essays and reports, and yes, those kinds of efforts.

'Wrote' may be acceptable but present perfect 'have written' fits ongoing context; 'in the reports' is awkward—combine 'essays and reports'. 'That kinds' is incorrect: use 'those kinds' for plural and 'efforts' matches 'kinds'. Suggestion: Use 'essays and reports' together and 'those kinds of efforts'; consider present perfect to show ongoing practice.