打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise: give a direct topic sentence saying which you prefer, then add one or two specific reasons using coherent linking words. Avoid unclear words (e.g., "leak", "leather") and unnecessary repetition. Keep within 2–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary like "easier", "more comfortable", or "helps memory."

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes with a pen I understand and retain ideas more easily, whereas typing on a phone often feels less focused.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a brief clarifying detail. Correct small grammar errors ("That's mean" → "That means") and avoid filler words. Use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't own a desktop computer. Therefore, most of my daily typing—for emails and schoolwork—is done on my laptop.

建議: Give a clear time reference in one sentence, then add a short specific detail about how you learned. Fix grammar and tense ("I was allowed at 10 years old" → "I learned when I was 10"). Use linking words like "because" or "and" to make sentences coherent.

範例: I learned to type when I was about 10 years old because my father let me use his computer for the first time. After that, I practiced regularly by doing simple exercises and typing texts online.

建議: Answer directly: state your main method for improvement, then give specific details and an example. Avoid rhetorical questions and unclear phrases. Use linking words like "by" or "for example" and correct grammar ("these they exposing" is incorrect).

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day, for example by writing emails and doing online typing exercises. Additionally, I use typing tutor websites to increase my speed and accuracy.

× But I prefer handwriting, leather and type typing because I don't think I can leak how much more easier than typing because we actually move our hand instead of just pressing on smartphone.

✓ But I prefer handwriting because I don't think it is much easier than typing; with handwriting we actually move our hand instead of just pressing on a smartphone.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect words ('leather', 'leak', 'type typing'), awkward comparison ('how much more easier than typing'), and sentence-structure problems. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' and 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs'. Correct by removing wrong words, use 'it is much easier' or 'much easier' properly (avoid 'more easier'), and clarify the contrast. Suggestion: simplify the sentence into clear clauses and avoid redundant words.

× Well, because I have no desktop or PC computer with me, I only have a laptop. That's mean most of the time I just use laptop keyboard.

✓ Well, I don't have a desktop PC; I only have a laptop. That means most of the time I just use the laptop keyboard.

Errors: 'because' at start is unnecessary, 'That's mean' should be 'That means' (subject-verb agreement), and missing article before 'laptop keyboard'. This matches 'Sentence structure errors' and 'Subject-verb agreement errors' and 'Article errors'. Fix by removing an unnecessary conjunction, use correct verb form 'means', and include the definite article 'the' before 'laptop keyboard'.

× Since my first memory I was allowed at 10 years old.

✓ From my earliest memory, I was allowed to use it when I was 10 years old.

Original mixes time expressions and has missing infinitive 'to use it'. The phrase 'since my first memory' is awkward; better 'From my earliest memory' or 'As far back as I remember'. Maintain past tense 'was allowed' because it refers to a past event. Suggestion: use clear time clause and include the action allowed.

× It was the first time I used my father's computer and I Start learning since then.

✓ It was the first time I used my father's computer, and I started learning how to type from then on.

Errors: inconsistent tense and capitalization ('Start'), and incorrect use of 'since then' with simple past. Use past tense 'started' and phrase 'from then on' to indicate continuation. This matches 'Past tense issue' and 'Sentence structure errors'.

× Will I simply just keep using it every single day without stopping?

✓ I simply kept using it every single day without stopping.

This sentence is structured as a question ('Will I') but the student intended a statement about past or habitual action. Change to a declarative past/habitual form. Also remove redundant 'simply just'. Matches 'Sentence structure errors' and 'Incorrect use of adverbs'. Suggestion: decide on tense and avoid unnecessary adverb pairs.

× Because these they exposing with electric electronic device is common.

✓ Because exposure to electronic devices is common.

Original has ungrammatical phrase 'these they exposing with electric electronic device'. Use the noun 'exposure' and plural 'electronic devices'. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' and 'Incorrect use of nouns'. Keep sentence concise and use correct collocations.

× So typing on smartphone or other electronic devices is common.

✓ So typing on smartphones or other electronic devices is common.

Missing plural on 'smartphone' when speaking generally. This matches 'Singular and plural issue'. Use plural 'smartphones' to generalize. Also sentence is otherwise fine; ensure consistency in number.