打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 질문에 직접 답하고 이유를 명확하고 자연스럽게 제시하세요. 현재 답변은 문법과 어휘 오류(예: 'when I was child', 'typing license')가 있으며 불필요한 정보가 어색하게 연결되어 있습니다. 한두 문장으로 핵심을 말하고 이유를 구체적으로 덧붙이세요. 예: 선호(typing) → 이유(읽기/정리 편함, 속도) → 짧게 배경 추가(어렸을 때 배움).

範例: I prefer typing because my handwriting is hard to read and typing lets me work much faster. I also learned to type when I was a child, so I feel more comfortable using a keyboard.

建議: 명확하고 자연스러운 문장 구조로 바꾸세요. 현재 답변은 단어 선택과 문장 연결이 부정확합니다('locker keyboard', 'relate to', 'confident', 'not heavyweight'). 어떤 기기를 매일 사용하는지 먼저 말하고, 이유(휴대성, 편리함 등)를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

範例: I usually use a portable wireless keyboard with my iPad because it's lightweight and easy to carry. This setup is convenient when I need to type on the go.

建議: 시간표현과 사건의 흐름을 자연스럽게 정리하세요. 현재 답변은 어법 오류('landed to type', 'conversation certificate', 'timing itself')와 불명확한 표현이 있습니다. 언제 배웠는지(grade or age), 계기(interest in computers), 어떻게 배웠는지(lessons or tests), 성과를 간결히 순서대로 말하세요.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school because I became interested in computers. I practiced regularly and even took a typing test, where I got a good score.

建議: 개선 방법을 더 구체적으로 설명하세요. 현재 답변은 과거 활동만 말하고, 연습 방법이나 빈도, 결과에 대한 구체적 세부정보가 부족합니다. 연습의 종류(온라인 도구, 게임, 과제), 빈도, 성과를 연결어로 자연스럽게 제시하세요.

範例: In high school I practiced typing every day in my computer class, which helped me improve. I also used online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer typing because my handwriting is so bad and then I have a typing license when I was child.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is so bad, and I had a typing certificate when I was a child.

The sentence has a plural/singular and article issue: 'when I was child' needs the article 'a child' (singular noun requires an article). Also 'typing license' is unnatural; 'typing certificate' fits the context. Tense should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns and match tense to time expressions.

× This day I usually bring my locker keyboard with my iPad because my iPad relate to my laptop keyboard. It is so confident it's not heavyweight.

✓ These days I usually bring my Logitech keyboard with my iPad because my iPad connects to my laptop keyboard. It is lightweight and not heavy.

Multiple errors: 'This day' should be 'These days' for habitual actions. 'locker keyboard' likely intended 'Logitech keyboard' (brand) or 'portable keyboard'; corrected to 'Logitech keyboard'. 'relate to' is wrong for devices connecting; use 'connects to'. 'It is so confident it's not heavyweight' is ungrammatical: 'confident' wrong word; use 'lightweight' and phrase 'not heavy'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'iPad relate' -> 'iPad connects'. Suggestions: use correct vocabulary for devices, plural forms for habitual time expressions, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Question sentence is correct; no change needed. It properly uses past tense auxiliary 'did' for asking about a past event. No correction required.

× When I was an elementary school, I became interested in computer, so I landed to type and took a typing test. I earned a conversation certificate and achieved a good score on the timing itself.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I became interested in computers, so I learned to type and took a typing test. I earned a certification and achieved a good score on the timed test.

Multiple structure and vocabulary issues: 'When I was an elementary school' needs 'in elementary school'. 'interested in computer' should be 'interested in computers' (count noun/general interest). 'landed to type' is incorrect; intended 'learned to type'. 'conversation certificate' is wrong word; likely 'certification'. 'timing itself' unclear; 'timed test' fits. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('in'), pluralize general nouns, and choose appropriate verbs and nouns for tests and certificates.

× I was at high school. I was practice every day in my computer class, so I learned to type faster.

✓ I was in high school. I practiced every day in my computer class, so I learned to type faster.

'at high school' can be 'in high school' to indicate being a student. 'I was practice every day' is ungrammatical; use simple past 'I practiced every day'. Tense consistency: simple past 'practiced' and 'learned' for past habits. Suggestion: use correct past tense verb forms and prepositions for school contexts.