打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は明確ですが、文法と語順の自然さを改善し、理由を具体化しましょう。例えば時制の一致、冠詞や複数形、冗長な表現の削減、接続語の使用で論理を明確にします。1) “if I write a mistake”は不自然なので“if I make a mistake”にする。2) “delete the word and sentences”は“delete words or sentences”に直す。3) 補足としていつやどんな時にタイピングを好むかを加えると説得力が上がります。

範例: I prefer typing because if I make a mistake I can easily delete words or sentences without using an eraser. Also, typing is faster for me, especially when I need to write long reports or emails.

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法、語順、語彙の選び方、冗長さを改善しましょう。重複する語（usually）が続くため一つに統一し、“homework assignment is usually report”は不自然なので“my assignments are usually reports”や“my homework usually consists of reports”に直す。理由をもう一文で補足すると良いです。

範例: I usually type on my laptop because most of my assignments are reports that require a lot of typing. In addition, my laptop is portable, so I can work wherever I study.

建議: 文法ミスと語の重複が多く、時制の誤り（現在形の“have”）や不要な繰り返しが目立ちます。正しい過去形を使い、授業内容を簡潔に説明しましょう。また結びの一文で具体的に何を学んだかを明示すると良いです。例えば“at 16 I took a course”の形にして、“typing and basic programming”のようにまとめる。

範例: I learned to type when I was 16. I took a course on digital devices where I practiced typing and learned basic computer programming.

建議: 表現が不自然で重複（practiced practicing）があるため、簡潔かつ具体的に改善方法を述べましょう。例えば練習頻度、使う練習法（タイピング練習サイト、タイムドテスト、正しい姿勢の意識）や改善の結果（速さや正確さの向上）を入れると説得力が増します。文は接続詞で繋げて流れを滑らかにしましょう。

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing exercises and timed tests. Over time, this helped my fingers remember the key positions and increased both my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because if I write a mistake, typing can easily delete the word and sentences without using eraser.

✓ I prefer typing because if I make a mistake, typing can easily delete words and sentences without using an eraser.

The errors involve article use and word choice. Use 'make a mistake' not 'write a mistake'. 'Erase' is a verb; the noun is 'eraser', and it needs the indefinite article 'an' before it. Also plural 'words and sentences' is more natural. Suggestion: use common collocations: 'make a mistake', 'an eraser', and pluralize when referring generally.

× I usually type on my laptop every day because my homework assignment is usually report so I need to type on my laptop.

✓ I usually type on my laptop every day because my homework assignments are usually reports, so I need to use my laptop to type.

Plural nouns are needed: 'homework assignment' → 'homework assignments' (general habitual reference) and 'report' → 'reports'. Also improve clarity by adding a comma and using 'use my laptop to type'. Suggestion: match singular/plural to general statements and repeat nouns only when necessary.

× When I was 16 I have a subject of subject for digital devices.

✓ When I was 16 I had a subject about digital devices.

Tense inconsistency: talking about a past time requires past tense 'had' not 'have'. Also 'a subject of subject for' is ungrammatical; use 'a subject about' or 'a course on'. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past events and choose correct preposition ('about' or 'on').

× So I I studied typing and making creating computer program in in this.

✓ So I studied typing and creating computer programs in that course.

This sentence has repetition ('I I', 'in in') and incorrect verb forms. Use parallel gerunds: 'studied typing and creating computer programs'. Specify 'in that course' to refer back. Suggestion: remove duplicated words and keep verbs parallel and clear.

× I just practiced practicing typing.

✓ I just practiced typing.

Redundant use of both 'practiced' and 'practicing'. Use either 'practiced typing' or 'was practicing typing'. 'Practiced typing' is correct and concise. Suggestion: avoid repeating verb forms; prefer simple past 'practiced' with gerund object.

× Practicing typing every day my body remember how to type and where the keyboard is.

✓ By practicing typing every day, my body remembers how to type and where the keys are.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'my body remember' should be 'my body remembers'. Also add a connector 'By' or restructure the clause for clarity. 'Keyboard' → 'keys' is more natural when referring to locations. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and use clear connectors for adverbial phrases.