打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'I'm more into typing' or 'I prefer typing to handwriting'), and avoid vague phrases like 'making a package'. Add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it saves time and is easier to edit. For example, when I write a college essay I can quickly rearrange paragraphs and correct mistakes on a computer, which makes the process faster and neater.

建議: Give a clear direct answer first, then add one specific reason. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I type on a laptop every day because I only have one'). Avoid irrelevant details and informal phrasing. Keep within 2–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'but'.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because it is the only computer I own. However, I hope to get a more powerful PC in the future so I can both work and play games more smoothly.

建議: Respond with a precise topic sentence and follow with clear supporting details. Correct verb forms and expression ('I learned when I was ten' and 'I started by copying simple sentences'). Explain briefly what you did to learn and avoid unclear phrases like 'assured sentences'. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

範例: I learned to type when I was ten years old because I enjoyed watching my father use his keyboard. At first I practised by copying simple sentences, but later I stopped practising regularly so my progress slowed.

建議: Answer directly and use correct tense and clear expressions (e.g., 'I haven't taken any typing classes'). Describe specific actions you take to improve typing (practice methods, websites, exercises) and use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'. Keep it short and focused.

範例: I haven't taken any typing classes; instead, I improved by doing my homework and writing essays regularly. Recently, I have also used online typing tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer more into typing since it reduce amount of time that I need for making a package.

✓ I prefer typing because it reduces the amount of time I need to make a package.

The sentence uses incorrect verb form and awkward phrasing. 'Prefer' should be followed by the gerund 'typing' not 'more into typing'. The verb 'reduce' must be third person singular 'reduces' to agree with 'it' (subject-verb agreement). 'Amount of time that I need for making a package' is wordy; use 'the amount of time I need to make a package' for natural English.

× For instance, when I'm making a college essay, it's much more convenient to use keyboard.

✓ For instance, when I'm writing a college essay, it's much more convenient to use a keyboard.

Use the verb 'writing' rather than 'making' for essays. Include the article 'a' before 'keyboard'. 'Use keyboard' is incorrect without an article or possessive. 'Writing' better matches collocation.

× I type on laptop keyboard everyday since I only have a laptop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day since I only have a laptop.

Add the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. 'Every day' is two words when used as an adverb (meaning daily). The sentence needs these small corrections for standard English.

× It is. It's an HHP brand laptop but I hope I could get an A PC in the future since I could use it for playing games rather than only working on my homeworks.

✓ It's an HHP-brand laptop, but I hope I can get a PC in the future because I could use it for playing games instead of only doing my homework.

Multiple issues: remove redundant sentence 'It is.' Use hyphen 'HHP-brand' and lowercase 'brand' if needed. Use 'I hope I can' for present-future possibility rather than 'could' which suggests conditional; keep tense consistent. 'A PC' should be 'a PC' not 'A PC'; 'playing games rather than only working on my homeworks' is awkward: use 'instead of only doing my homework'. 'Homework' is uncountable and does not take plural 'homeworks'.

× Yeah, it was when I was 10 years old.

✓ I learned when I was 10 years old.

The original reply 'Yeah, it was when I was 10 years old.' is a fragment and not a clear answer to 'When did you learn how to type'. Use past tense 'learned' to state the action and specify the age. This fixes sentence structure and makes the response direct.

× I saw my dad typing on his keyboard and I was interested to practice how to do it.

✓ I saw my dad typing on his keyboard and became interested in practicing how to do it.

Use 'became interested in' rather than 'was interested to' and 'practicing' (gerund) after 'interested in'. 'Practice how to do it' is better as 'practicing how to do it' for natural collocation.

× Initially I was only type it assured sentences, but afterward I stopped improving.

✓ Initially I only typed short sentences, but afterward I stopped improving.

Use past tense 'typed' to match 'Initially' (past time). The phrase 'type it assured sentences' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'typed short/simple sentences'. 'Stopped improving' is acceptable but clarify by keeping past tense. This corrects verb tense and wording.

× I never done any class or courses for typing on on a keyboard before.

✓ I never took any classes or courses for typing on a keyboard before.

Use past tense 'took' rather than 'done' with 'class/courses'. 'Done any class' is incorrect collocation. Use plural 'classes' and remove duplicate 'on'.

× All I did was only working on my homeworks and making some essays along the way.

✓ All I did was work on my homework and write some essays along the way.

After a cleft 'All I did was', use base verb 'work' not 'working'. 'Homework' is uncountable, not 'homeworks'. Use 'write essays' instead of 'making essays' for natural collocation.

× I get used to talking.

✓ I got used to typing.

Context refers to typing, not talking. Use past tense 'got used to' to match previous narrative and 'typing' (gerund) after 'used to'. 'Get used to' requires a gerund; also 'talking' is incorrect content.