打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use gerunds/nouns properly), and avoid repetition. Add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting for everyday tasks because it helps me remember things better. However, I sometimes type when I’m working because it’s faster. For example, I write shopping lists and personal notes by hand, but I type reports at the office.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating the same idea, and give a specific reason or brief example. Use linking words for clarity.

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and suits my work needs. For example, I can take my laptop to meetings and work from different locations, which is more convenient than a desktop.

建議: Use correct verb tenses and simpler sentence structure: state a clear time, then one supporting detail. Remove redundant or confused phrases and link ideas coherently.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I started college, when I bought my first laptop. Since then, I have practised by researching and studying online, which helped me improve my speed.

建議: Be specific about methods and give concise examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice: for example, I type emails, chat with friends online, and complete short typing exercises. Because I use the laptop every day, my speed and accuracy have gradually improved.

× Well, I prefer to handwriting.

✓ Well, I prefer handwriting.

Use the noun 'handwriting' after 'prefer' rather than the infinitive 'to handwriting'. 'Prefer' can be followed by a noun or verb-ing; here the correct form is 'prefer handwriting' or 'prefer to write by hand'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer handwriting' or 'I prefer to write by hand.'

× I prefer to.

✓ I prefer that.

'I prefer to' is incomplete because 'to' requires a verb (infinitive) or an object. Contextually the student likely means 'I prefer that' or 'I prefer handwriting.' Suggestion: complete the phrase, e.g. 'I prefer that' or 'I prefer handwriting.'

× Sometimes I use type keyboard when I am work, but I usually use handwriting for daily life.

✓ Sometimes I type on a keyboard when I am working, but I usually use handwriting in daily life.

'use type keyboard' is ungrammatical; use 'type on a keyboard'. 'When I am work' should be 'when I am working' (present continuous). 'For daily life' is better expressed as 'in daily life.' Suggestion: use 'type on a keyboard' and present participle 'working.'

× Actually I use laptop keyboard everyday because it is very convenient for work and I don't have desktop and keyboard is convenient for work.

✓ Actually I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is very convenient for work and I don't have a desktop; the keyboard is convenient for work.

Missing articles: 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a desktop.' 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). Also sentence needed smoother connection; add 'the' before 'keyboard' to refer back. Suggestion: include articles and correct 'every day.'

× I had learned to type on a keyboard in my college having my old laptop in my first time.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard in college when I first had my old laptop.

Past simple 'learned' is appropriate rather than past perfect 'had learned' because no earlier past reference. 'In my college' should be 'in college.' 'Having my old laptop in my first time' is ungrammatical; restructure as 'when I first had my old laptop.' Suggestion: use past simple and clear time expression 'when I first had.'

× I also use keep use the laptop to research information it and study in in Internet.

✓ I also keep using the laptop to research information and study on the Internet.

Redundant verbs 'use keep use' should be 'keep using' (verb + -ing). 'Research information it' has an extra 'it' and is awkward; use 'research information.' 'Study in in Internet' should be 'study on the Internet.' Suggestion: use 'keep using' and the preposition 'on' with 'the Internet.'

× Well, I saw the practice is import was important that I always use my laptop, chat with my friends and I can connect with my friends and improve my typing.

✓ Well, I saw that practice was important, so I always use my laptop to chat with my friends; I can connect with them and improve my typing.

Mixed tense and wrong words: 'is import was important' is incorrect; choose past 'was important' and add 'that' for a clause. Use 'so' to show result. 'Chat with my friends' needs an infinitive purpose 'to chat.' Repeating 'with my friends' can be replaced by 'with them.' Suggestion: simplify and correct tense, add conjunction 'so' and 'to' before verbs of purpose.