打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly compare typing and handwriting with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Improve grammar (e.g., "compared to handwriting"), and limit response to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and neater. For example, when I type assignments I can edit quickly and meet deadlines, whereas handwriting takes longer and can become messy.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating which device you use daily. Use linking words to add one or two specific reasons (e.g., portability, battery). Correct collocations ("very convenient" not "too much convenient") and avoid unfinished sentences.

範例: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I take my laptop to the library to work on assignments and prepare presentations, and I also type quick notes during lectures.

建議: Answer with a clear time reference in a single opening sentence, then briefly explain context or motivation with linking words. Fix grammar ("in sixth grade", "my teacher told us") and avoid trailing incomplete sentences.

範例: I learned to type in the sixth grade when we had computer lessons at school. My teacher explained touch-typing techniques, and because I was very interested I practised regularly and improved quickly.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence describing your main method (regular practice). Use linking words to give a specific routine or example (frequency, tools). Correct phrasing ("on a regular basis", "increase my speed"). Keep within 2–4 concise sentences.

範例: I improve my typing by practising on a regular basis, usually for 20 minutes each day. For example, I use online typing drills to focus on accuracy and speed, and I track my progress to see gradual improvement.

× I usually prefer typing as compared to my typing because while writing the assignment with our own hands, it is very difficult for us to make in a particular time and uh, just feel that I felt bored while writing on the paper while typing on the.

✓ I usually prefer typing rather than handwriting because when we write assignments by hand it is difficult to finish them in a limited time, and I feel bored writing on paper compared with typing.

The original sentence misuses pronouns ('my typing', 'our own hands') and mixes perspectives. Use consistent pronouns (we/us or I/my). Also replace 'as compared to' with 'rather than' for preference. Simplify redundant phrases and correct verb forms ('make in a particular time' -> 'finish them in a limited time'). Suggestions: choose a single perspective (I or we), use 'rather than' for comparisons of preference, and simplify clauses.

× I usually type on the laptop because it is too much convenient and I usually prefer to go library with my laptop to type my assignments and some presentations in my college homework. As I usually prefer to make some notes for me that time I usually use.

✓ I usually type on my laptop because it is very convenient, and I often go to the library with my laptop to type my assignments and prepare presentations for college. When I need to take notes, I use it then.

Errors: incorrect article use ('the laptop' should be 'my laptop' unless a specific laptop was previously mentioned), 'go library' needs the preposition 'to' and 'the library' or 'a library' depending on context, and 'too much convenient' is incorrect—use 'very convenient' or 'too convenient' with a negative implication. The second sentence was incomplete and unclear; rewrite to express intended meaning. Suggestions: use possessive pronouns for personal items, include 'to' after 'go', and replace 'too much' with 'very'.

× I remember when I was in 6th grade, I started learning to type on keyboard when I had a lecture on my computer.

✓ I remember that when I was in sixth grade, I started learning to type on the keyboard during a computer lesson.

Tense is mostly fine, but word choice and articles are incorrect: 'on keyboard' needs 'the keyboard' or 'a keyboard', and 'had a lecture on my computer' is awkward—use 'during a computer lesson'. Also write 'sixth' in words in formal writing. Suggestion: use 'during' for events and include correct articles.

× Because that time my teacher was asked me that there are different types of typing in the keyboard and I have too much interest that time.

✓ At that time my teacher explained that there are different typing methods on the keyboard, and I was very interested.

Problems: incorrect verb forms and pronouns ('was asked me' is incorrect—use 'asked me' or 'explained to me'), 'types of typing in the keyboard' is awkward—use 'typing methods on the keyboard', and 'have too much interest that time' should be past tense 'was very interested.' Suggestion: use past tense consistently when referring to past events and choose correct verbs ('explain', 'ask') and prepositions ('on the keyboard').

× That's why I learned this in the.

✓ That's why I learned to type then.

The original sentence is incomplete and missing an object and correct preposition. 'Learned this in the' is unfinished. Use a clear object and adverb of time: 'learned to type then' or 'learned it at that time.' Suggestion: complete the sentence by specifying what was learned and when.

× I usually improve my typing while practicing as a regular base because I believe that while typing every day I have too much speed to type in few minutes, while if a person never type in a daily purpose or they type once.

✓ I usually improve my typing by practicing regularly because I believe that typing every day increases my speed, while a person who never types daily or types only occasionally will not improve as much.

Issues: awkward phrases and verb forms ('as a regular base' -> 'regularly', 'have too much speed to type in few minutes' -> 'increases my speed', 'if a person never type' -> 'if a person never types'). Use third-person singular agreement ('types'), and avoid 'they' ambiguity when referring back to 'a person' (use 'they' only as acceptable singular gender-neutral pronoun but ensure verb agreement). Suggestion: use adverb 'regularly', correct subject-verb agreement, and express comparative idea clearly.