打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문법과 시제, 단어 선택에서 오류가 많습니다. 우선 주제문은 현재 시제로 명확하게 말해야 하고, 이유를 1~2개로 간결하게 제시하세요. 또한 'handwriting'과 같은 단어 사용 시 비교 구조를 명확히 하고, 불필요한 문장은 제거하세요. 예문을 3~4문장으로 구성하고 연결어(for example, because, so)를 사용해 논리를 정리하세요.

範例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and faster than handwriting. For example, I can easily edit and save my notes on a laptop, which saves time. Because of this convenience, I usually type my essays and emails instead of writing by hand.

建議: 문장 구조가 반복적이고 어순 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 간단한 주제문을 말하고, 하나의 이유와 예시를 덧붙이세요. 관사(a/the) 사용과 문장 연결을 개선하세요. 예를 들어 'I use a laptop'처럼 정확한 표현을 사용하고, 활동을 나열할 때는 'for example' 또는 'such as'로 연결하세요.

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop computer. For example, I write blog posts and send emails on my laptop. I find the laptop convenient for both work and personal tasks.

建議: 문법(과거 시제), 관사, 단어 배열에 많은 오류가 있습니다. 과거 시제(simple past)를 사용해 배운 시점을 명확히 말하고, 이유나 배경을 한두 문장으로 구체화하세요. 친구들과 함께 배웠다는 내용을 연결어('also', 'together')로 자연스럽게 표현하세요.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school because there were typing classes in Korea. Typing quickly was considered important, so my classmates and I practiced together during those lessons.

建議: 질문은 현재형으로 묻고 있으므로 현재 어떻게 향상시키는지에 대해 말해야 합니다. 연습 방법(온라인 프로그램, 연습 시간, 게임 등)을 구체적으로 하나나 두 가지 제시하고, 결과(속도 향상 등)를 언급하세요. 문법적으로는 주어-동사 일치와 관사 사용을 고쳐야 합니다.

範例: I improve my typing by using online typing programs and regular practice. For instance, I use a typing website for 20 minutes a day, which helped me increase my speed and accuracy.

× I do preferred typing because typing is more convenient and comfortable and useful to hand handwriting.

✓ I preferred typing because typing is more convenient, comfortable, and more useful than handwriting.

The student used 'do preferred' which incorrectly combines auxiliary 'do' with past tense 'preferred'. Use simple past 'preferred'. Also 'useful to hand handwriting' is incorrect; compare with 'more useful than handwriting'. Improve by removing unnecessary 'do' and using comparative 'more useful than'.

× For before preparing this examined, I usually do not.

✓ Before this exam, I usually did not (handwrite).

The phrase 'For before preparing this examined' is ungrammatical. Use 'Before this exam' and match tense 'did not' with past. Add the omitted verb 'handwrite' if needed. Structure should be Subject + Verb.

× I type a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have desktop computer and I use laptop computer every day and when I use laptop counter I do.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop computer, and I use my laptop every day.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'type' and missing articles 'a' before 'desktop computer'. 'Laptop computer' can be simplified to 'laptop' and redundant phrases removed. 'When I use laptop counter I do' is unclear and was omitted for clarity.

× I write blog post and I write emails.

✓ I write blog posts and emails.

Use plural 'blog posts' for general habitual action and combine items in a concise phrase. Repeating 'I write' is unnecessary.

× When I was elementary school, I type run a typing keyboard because there are classes for typing keyboard back in Korea.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I learned to type because there were typing classes in Korea.

Missing preposition 'in' before 'elementary school'. 'I type run a typing keyboard' is ungrammatical; use 'learned to type'. 'There are classes' should be past 'there were classes' to match time frame.

× It is very important to fast typing keyboard in Korea.

✓ It was very important to type quickly in Korea.

Use adverb 'quickly' to modify the verb 'type' not the adjective 'fast' before noun. Also match past tense 'was' and place 'type' before adverb.

× So we tried. I and my friends classmates tried to.

✓ So we tried. My friends and I practiced together.

Awkward word order 'I and my friends classmates' should be 'My friends and I'. 'Tried to' needs an object; use 'practiced together' for clarity.

× When I was young, I exercised typing keyboard.

✓ When I was young, I practiced typing on the keyboard.

'Exercised typing keyboard' is incorrect collocation; use 'practiced typing' and include preposition 'on the keyboard'.

× There are programmed to practice typing in Korea.

✓ There were programs to practice typing in Korea.

Use plural noun 'programs' and past tense 'were' to match the time frame. 'Programmed' is wrong form; use 'programs'.

× So we and I and my friends typing on P keyboard to practice.

✓ So my friends and I typed on the PC keyboard to practice.

Word order and form incorrect: 'we and I and my friends' should be 'my friends and I'. Use past tense 'typed' and correct noun 'PC keyboard'. Remove extraneous words.