打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use present tense and a clear topic sentence; simplify and organize reasons with linking words. Be specific about why typing is better (speed, legibility, editing). Avoid unclear phrases like "open man shape" and "pulling."

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is messy and hard to read. Also, typing saves me time and makes editing and organizing my notes much easier. For example, when I type I can quickly correct mistakes and search for phrases in documents.

建議: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give a brief reason and condition using linking words. Clarify frequency and ownership; avoid negation confusion.

範例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I don't own a computer. However, I sometimes use my cousin's laptop when it is available to practice typing and complete assignments.

建議: Start with a clear time phrase and use correct past tense. Give a concise reason and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and remove repetition.

範例: I learned to type on a laptop when I was in high school. My sister had a laptop then and she asked me to practice because I was about to start senior high school, so I spent time learning basic typing skills.

建議: Organize into a topic sentence, methods, and result. Use past or present consistently and specify the practice method clearly (name of website or program). Include linking words and a clear outcome.

範例: I improved my typing by using online typing courses and practice tests. For example, I used a typing website with exercises and practiced daily because I was applying for a call center job. As a result, I increased my speed to about 35 words per minute.

× I preferred typing rather than handwriting because I have ugly handwriting open man shape and also I do prefer typing to less my time and it will be make easier pulling.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is ugly and messy, and I prefer typing to save time and make things easier.

The student used 'preferred' (past) though talking about a general preference, so present tense 'prefer' is correct. There are also sentence structure and word choice problems (replaced with clearer expressions). Use 'is' for present state and 'to save time' as correct infinitive purpose structure. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I can't type desktop or laptop keyboard, but not every day 'cause I don't have one.

✓ I don't have a desktop or laptop, so I don't type every day.

The original used 'can't' incorrectly; the student means they do not own a device. Replace with simple present negative 'don't' to state lack of possession. Also reorder for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 4

× I don't own 1, so I need to see if the laptop of my cousin is available to me to practice it.

✓ I don't own one, so I need to see if my cousin's laptop is available for me to practice on.

Use the word 'one' instead of the numeral '1' in formal sentences. Also corrected possessive and preposition use ('for me to practice on') for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× When I was high school I learned how to use or type on a keyboard of a laptop because my sister have laptop that time and she wants me to train 'cause I will be a Senior High School after a month and she want me to.

✓ When I was in high school, I learned how to type on a laptop keyboard because my sister had a laptop then and she wanted me to practice since I would start senior high school in a month.

Use 'was in high school' for the time expression. Change 'have' to past 'had' and 'wants/want' to past 'wanted' to match the past timeframe. Use 'would start' for future-in-the-past. Also simplify 'type on a laptop keyboard' for natural order. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× To improve my typing skill I search online and I I saw the monkey typing skills so that time I was applying for a call center agent position.

✓ To improve my typing skills, I searched online and I saw the Monkey Typing website while I was applying for a call center agent position.

Tense consistency: use past 'searched' and 'saw' because the context is past. 'Monkey Typing' likely a proper noun so capitalized and treated as a website/resource. Added commas and corrected 'skill' to plural 'skills'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× So I practice every day until I got a 35 words per minute.

✓ So I practiced every day until I reached 35 words per minute.

Use past tense 'practiced' to match past context. Say 'reached 35 words per minute' rather than 'got a 35 words per minute' and remove the extra article. Use 'words per minute' without 'a'. Grammar problem type ID: 5