打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장 구조와 표현을 더 자연스럽고 정확하게 정리하세요. 예를 들어 주제 문장으로 선호를 분명히 밝힌 뒤, 이유를 구체적으로 두세 개의 짧은 문장으로 연결합니다. 또한 'remembered the writing' 같은 어색한 표현은 'helps me remember what I write'처럼 자연스럽게 고치세요. 연결어(for example, because)도 활용해 논리를 명확히 하세요.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things better. For example, writing notes by hand makes it easier to recall important points later. It also feels more comfortable for studying and organising my thoughts.

建議: 답변을 간결하고 논리적으로 정리하세요. 중복(replication) 표현과 불필요한 단어를 줄이고, 한 문장에 하나의 요지를 담아 명확히 응답하세요. 데스크톱과 휴대폰 사용 빈도를 비교할 때는 연결어(However, Actually, Mostly)를 사용해 차이를 분명히 하세요.

範例: I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. Actually, I mostly type on my smartphone, so I rarely use a computer. When I do need a full keyboard, I prefer a desktop.

建議: 시제와 문장 구조를 정확히 사용하세요. 과거 경험을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 이유와 연습 방법을 구체적으로 덧붙이세요. 불확실한 표현('or something')은 피하고, 연습의 장소와 방법을 명확히 기술하세요.

範例: I learned to type in middle school because computer classes were part of the curriculum. After that, I practised at home using my family's keyboard to improve my speed and accuracy.

建議: 내용이 일관되지 않고 불필요한 말(주저함)이 많습니다. 어떤 활동(예: typing practice, online exercises)을 통해 개선하는지 구체적으로 말하고, 빈도와 방법(예: daily practice, typing software)을 명확히 표현하세요. 주저하는 소리는 제거하고 간결하게 말하세요.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly online and using typing software. For example, I practise for 20 minutes every day and do exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I definitely prefer handwriting because it's more remembered the writing and it's really easy to study or work for me.

✓ I definitely prefer handwriting because I remember what I write better, and it's really easy for me to study or work that way.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and word order ('more remembered the writing') making it ungrammatical. Replace with 'I remember what I write better' to use correct object pronoun and verb structure. Also change 'easy to study or work for me' to 'easy for me to study or work that way' for correct preposition and clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× No, I I literally use the keyboard or desktop. Desktop because I only use. I always use handphone on typing and I don't really use computer at all.

✓ No, I don't usually use a desktop or keyboard. I always type on my phone, and I rarely use a computer.

Multiple sentence fragments and incorrect word choices ('I I literally use the keyboard or desktop. Desktop because I only use.') cause structure errors. Combine ideas into complete sentences: use negative auxiliary 'do not' with 'usually' for frequency, 'type on my phone' is natural, and 'rarely use a computer' corrects 'don't really use computer at all'. Also use articles 'a' and possessive 'my'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I learn at middle school and I was needed to use the computer or something and and I practice it at home my keyboard.

✓ I learned in middle school because I needed to use a computer, and I practiced typing on my keyboard at home.

The sentence mixes present and past incorrectly. Use past tense 'learned' and 'needed' for past events. Reorder phrase 'practice it at home my keyboard' to 'practiced typing on my keyboard at home' for correct verb and object placement and include appropriate articles/prepositions. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× When I was bowling, uh, sometimes, uh, I improve my keyboard typing and I practice more and I try to better typing.

✓ Sometimes when I was bored, I improved my typing on the keyboard, I practiced more, and I tried to type better.

'Bowling' is likely a misword for 'bored'—choose correct word. 'Improve my keyboard typing' should be 'improved my typing on the keyboard'; use past tense to match 'when I was'. 'Try to better typing' is ungrammatical—use 'tried to type better'. Also fix comma placement and parallel verb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 11