打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 응답은 이해는 되지만 문법과 표현이 어색하고 논리 전개가 불명확합니다. 먼저 주제문(topic sentence)을 분명히 하고 이유를 명확하게 제시하세요. 문장 연결에는 because 대신 so나 however를 적절히 사용하고, 'concentrate on my step' 같은 부정확한 표현은 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 답변은 3문장 이내로 간결하게 정리하세요. 예: 선호(핵심 진술) → 이유(구체적 설명) → 간단한 예시 또는 마무리.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me focus better on my ideas. For example, when I write by hand I avoid distractions from the computer and can organize my thoughts more clearly. Therefore I usually draft essays by hand before typing them up.

建議: 문법 시제와 관사 사용이 잘못되어 있습니다. 현재 습관을 말할 때는 현재형을 사용하고 관사(the/my)를 적절히 쓰세요. 또한 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어가고 불필요한 반복을 피하세요. 답변은 주제문 → 이유/상황 → 구체적 예의 구조로 구성하세요.

範例: Yes, I use my laptop every day because I study for the IELTS on it. In particular, I type a lot during my writing practice, since I need to get used to typing essays under time pressure.

建議: 답변의 시제와 문장구조가 혼동되어 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 'Maybe I was five years old' 같은 자연스러운 표현으로 주제문을 시작하고, 경험을 설명할 때는 한두 문장으로 명확하게 정리하세요. 불필요한 반복을 피하고, 게임이 처음 연습 방법이었다는 점을 연결어로 명확히 하세요.

範例: I think I learned to type when I was about five years old. My first practice came from playing an online game called Cat Rider, which had a chat feature, so I used typing to communicate with other players.

建議: 문장이 어색하고 의미가 불명확합니다. 개선 방법을 말할 땐 명확한 활동(예: 연습 프로그램, 타자 연습 사이트, 수업)과 그 결과(속도 향상, 정확도 향상)를 구체적으로 연결하세요. 또한 'in my opinion'은 불필요하므로 바로 요점을 말하는 것이 자연스럽습니다.

範例: I improved my typing through computer classes at elementary school, where we had regular typing lessons. Since then, I've practiced with online typing programs to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I'd like to say I prefer handwriting because when I type something I feel I can concentrate on my step, so I like handwriting.

✓ I'd like to say I prefer handwriting because when I type something I feel I can concentrate on my work, so I prefer handwriting.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses an incorrect noun 'step'. Replace 'step' with 'work' to convey meaning. Use 'prefer' consistently to match present simple preference. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and preferences and choose correct nouns (e.g. 'work' or 'thoughts').

× Yes, I typed on my laptop every day because I study IELTS through the my laptop.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I study for the IELTS on my laptop.

The student used past tense 'typed' but context indicates a habitual action, so present simple 'type' is correct. Remove the extra article 'the' before 'my laptop' and use 'study for the IELTS' or 'study IELTS'. Also replace 'through' with 'on' for device usage. Suggestion: use present simple for routines and correct prepositions for devices.

× Especially when I study writing session, I type.

✓ Especially when I study the writing section, I type.

Use present simple 'study' for habitual actions; change 'writing session' to 'writing section' (common IELTS term) and include the article 'the'. Suggestion: learn common collocations and articles with nouns.

× Maybe it was five years old.

✓ Maybe I was five years old.

The original uses 'it' incorrectly and verb 'was' needs a subject 'I'. For age statements use 'I was five years old.' Suggestion: use the person pronoun with 'was' when referring to age in the past.

× The first experience that I type something is through the game named Cat Rider.

✓ My first experience typing was through a game called Cat Rider.

After 'experience' use the -ing form 'typing' not base verb 'type'. Use 'a game called' instead of 'the game named' for natural phrasing and change word order. Suggestion: use noun+'-ing' after 'experience' and prefer natural noun phrases.

× There are there is chatting system is my first.

✓ There is a chat system; that was my first experience.

The original is ungrammatical with repeated 'there are there is' and incorrect structure. Use 'There is a chat system' to introduce, then clarify 'that was my first experience.' Suggestion: avoid repeating 'there is/are' and form clear clauses; use simple past to refer to that first experience.

× In my opinion, the elementary school class is helpful for me because there is type class in program so I can increase.

✓ In my opinion, elementary school classes were helpful for me because there was a typing class in the program, so I could improve.

Use plural 'classes' for general reference or keep singular with article. Use past tense 'were'/'was' if referring to past schooling. 'type class' should be 'typing class'. 'in the program' is fine; 'I can increase' is vague — change to 'I could improve' or 'my typing improved.' Suggestion: match tense to context, use correct noun forms like 'typing', and express improvement clearly.