打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using cohesive linking words. Avoid fragmented phrases and unnecessary repetitions. For example, say you prefer typing because it’s faster and neater, then give a specific example (e.g. typing assignments or emails).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and produces neater text. For example, when I prepare essays or emails I can type quickly and edit mistakes easily, which saves time and makes my work clearer.

建議: Answer directly and give a specific detail: state which device you use (desktop or laptop), then explain why with one clear reason and an example. Use linking words like because or so. Avoid unfinished sentences.

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I take most of my classes and do homework on my laptop. For instance, I usually type reports and emails on my laptop, so I’m comfortable using its keyboard.

建議: Give a clear time reference and one specific context or memory. Use past tense correctly and link ideas with words like when or during. Reduce fillers (umm) and repetition.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school during a computer class. The teacher taught us basic typing and how to search information online, which helped me become comfortable with the keyboard early on.

建議: Provide a clear method and a specific example of practice. Use linking words (for example, by, so) and make sentences complete. Mention tools or routines you use to improve accuracy and speed.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice: for example, I use online typing exercises for 20 minutes a day to increase speed and accuracy. I also practice touch-typing and review errors to avoid repeating them.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster than handwriting and more.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and easier than handwriting.

The original sentence used 'more' incorrectly without specifying what follows; this is an adjective/adverb usage error. Replacing 'more' with 'easier' completes the comparison and uses the correct adjective. Keep parallel structure in comparisons: 'faster and easier than handwriting.'

× Easier to me for example handwriting is need to too much time to write.

✓ For example, handwriting is too time-consuming for me.

This sentence had incorrect prepositions and word order. 'To me' was placed awkwardly and 'need to too much time to write' is ungrammatical. Use 'too time-consuming for me' to express excessive time required and begin with 'For example' for clarity. Maintain correct adjective order and verb forms.

× Yes, I use type laptop, laptop keyboard every day because I write.

✓ Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I type.

The original mixes nouns and verbs incorrectly ('use type laptop') and omits the article. This is a sentence structure error. Use 'a laptop keyboard' (article + noun) and the correct verb 'type' to match meaning. Keep subject-verb-object order.

× When I write something I always use keyboard and my main assignment is.

✓ When I write something, I always use a keyboard, and my main assignments are typed on it.

The sentence was incomplete ('my main assignment is') and omitted an article. This is a sentence structure error. Provide a complete clause: 'my main assignments are typed on it' clarifies the role of the keyboard and matches plural 'assignments' if appropriate.

× I learned typing when when I was children, umm especially elementary school, I was I was in school and kind of program was teach how to use computer and searching something.

✓ I learned to type when I was a child, especially in elementary school, where a program taught us how to use computers and search for information.

Multiple tense and grammatical errors: use 'learned to type' not 'learned typing' for clarity, 'when I was a child' (singular), and past tense 'taught' for the program. Also correct nouns ('computers') and phrase 'search for information.' This fixes past tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Actually, practice is the best thing to improve because. A lot is make more efficient.

✓ Actually, practice is the best way to improve because it makes you much more efficient.

The original had sentence fragments and incorrect word forms. 'Thing to improve' is awkward; use 'way to improve.' 'A lot is make more efficient' is ungrammatical; use a subject 'it' with present tense 'makes' and adverb 'much' to modify 'more efficient.' This corrects tense and word choice for a clear statement.