打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: コメントを短く明確にし、不要な接続詞や曖昧な語を避けると自然さが増します。トピック文をはっきり言い、その後に1–2の具体的な理由をリンク語（for example, because, so）でつなぎましょう。最大5文に収め、曖昧な語（like, you know）を減らしてください。

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and requires more effort. For example, when I handwrite notes I remember them better, so I revise more effectively.

建議: 文を簡潔にし、繰り返しを避けましょう。理由は1つに絞って具体的に述べ、接続語（because, so, therefore）で論理を明確にしてください。曖昧な表現（like, more）を具体化してください。

範例: I usually type on my laptop’s built-in physical keyboard because it is portable and comfortable. Therefore I use it every day for writing and emails.

建議: 年齢や年数をはっきりさせ、推測の表現は一つに絞って簡潔に答えましょう。不要な曖昧語（maybe, like, yeah）を減らし、時制と語順を正しく使って明瞭に述べてください。

範例: I learned to type about 10 to 15 years ago when I took computer classes in Thailand at university, around the age of 18.

建議: 具体的な改善法を2〜3点に絞って述べ、各点に短い理由や例を加えてください。繰り返し（I I）や語尾の曖昧さをなくし、接続語（for example, such as, so）を適切に使って論理を整えましょう。

範例: I improve my typing by practicing daily and typing about topics I enjoy. For example, I practice essays for tests on my desktop and use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Nowadays, although I do a lot of typing, but I prefer handwriting because handwriting is something you put more effort into it and also you could see. Like.

✓ Nowadays, although I do a lot of typing, I prefer handwriting because you put more effort into it and you can also see it.

The sentence uses both 'although' and 'but' together which is redundant; choose one conjunction. Also there is an unnecessary 'it' after 'into' and 'could' is better as 'can' for general preference. Suggestion: remove 'but', delete extra 'it', and change 'could' to 'can' for clarity and correct conjunction use.

× Since I have a laptop computer, I mostly type my writing through a physical keyboard because like there are some attached keyboards, but I prefer more physical keyboard.

✓ Since I have a laptop computer, I mostly type using a physical keyboard because some keyboards are attached, but I prefer a physical keyboard.

Articles are inconsistent: 'a physical keyboard' is needed before the singular noun. The phrase 'prefer more physical keyboard' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer a physical keyboard'. Also 'type my writing through' is awkward; 'type using' is clearer. Suggestion: use appropriate articles ('a') and simpler verb phrase.

× I think it was a long time ago, probably around maybe 10 or 15 years ago when I started then computer class in Thailand when I was around like 18 or 16, yeah.

✓ I think it was a long time ago, probably around 10 or 15 years ago when I started computer classes in Thailand when I was around 16 or 18.

Tense is acceptable but the sentence has chronological and article errors and unclear ordering of ages. 'Then computer class' should be 'computer classes' or 'a computer class'. Ages should be ordered logically and without filler words like 'maybe' and 'like'. Suggestion: use plural 'classes' or 'a computer class', order ages ascending, and remove filler words for clarity.

× To improve my typing, I I just have to type regularly on a daily basis, writing about things I like, or for instance practicing writing essays for this other test on my desktop every day, so.

✓ To improve my typing, I just have to type regularly, writing about things I like, for example practicing writing essays for this test on my desktop every day.

Redundant 'I I' is a typo. 'On a daily basis' and 'every day' are repetitive; use one. 'For instance' followed by 'so' at the end is unnecessary. Suggestion: remove duplicate word, eliminate redundant time phrases, and replace 'for instance' with 'for example' for smoother flow.