打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (e.g., “easier to handwrite” not “easier to handwriting”).

範例: I prefer handwriting. For example, I rarely use a desktop or laptop, so my typing speed is slow, and I find it faster to handwrite notes when studying.

建議: Use a concise affirmative sentence then give a clear reason. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “a laptop keyboard”, “I'm preparing”). Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition.

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I am preparing for the IELTS writing test, so I practice typing essays and notes regularly.

建議: Give a direct time reference and one clear detail. Use correct sentence structure and past tense when referring to the past. Avoid vague fillers and unrelated details.

範例: I learned to type in primary school when I was about eight. However, I did not practice seriously at the time, so my speed remained slow.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence about your method, then give specific actions with linking words (e.g., “for example,” “also”). Use correct verb forms and avoid unclear phrases like “Don't realize handwriting.”

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I use online typing exercises and set aside 20 minutes each day to type essays on my laptop; I also try to type notes instead of handwriting to build speed.

× I prefer handwriting because I'm seldom typing on desktop or laptop, so my typing speed is quite slow and it is easier to handwriting to make a notes.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I seldom type on a desktop or laptop, so my typing speed is quite slow and it is easier to handwrite notes.

Errors: incorrect use of continuous form 'I'm seldom typing' (should use simple present 'I seldom type' for habitual action) and incorrect verb form 'handwriting' used as verb (use 'handwrite'). Also article and noun number: 'a notes' is wrong; use 'notes' or 'a note'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, use correct verb 'handwrite', and match articles/plural nouns.

× Absolutely yes. I type on laptop keyboard every day because I'm prepare. I'm preparing the IELTS writing, so I need to type some words to.

✓ Absolutely yes. I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm preparing. I'm preparing for the IELTS writing test, so I need to type some practice passages.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. 'I'm prepare' is incorrect; use present continuous 'I'm preparing'. Missing preposition 'for' before 'the IELTS writing test'. The phrase 'type some words to' is incomplete and ungrammatical; provide a clearer object such as 'type some practice passages'. Suggestions: include necessary articles, use correct verb forms, add prepositions, and complete sentence objects.

× Umm, I think as learning. To type a keyboard in primary school, but I don't really serious to study in so I might sleep quite.

✓ Umm, I learned to type on a keyboard in primary school, but I wasn't really serious about studying it, so I often slept a lot.

Errors: tense and verb forms incorrect. Use simple past 'I learned' for a finished action. Use 'learned to type' and correct noun order 'on a keyboard'. 'I don't really serious to study' is ungrammatical; use 'I wasn't really serious about studying it'. 'I might sleep quite' is wrong; use 'I often slept a lot' to indicate habitual past behavior. Suggestion: use simple past for past events, correct prepositions, and use appropriate adverbs for frequency.

× I think practice makes perfect, so for example I will find the online exercise to practice and more use the laptop. Don't realize handwriting.

✓ I think practice makes perfect, so for example I will look for online exercises to practice and use the laptop more. I won't neglect handwriting.

Errors: 'find the online exercise' should be 'look for online exercises' (plural and correct collocation). 'and more use the laptop' has incorrect word order; use 'use the laptop more'. 'Don't realize handwriting' is ungrammatical; intended meaning likely 'I won't neglect handwriting' or 'I won't stop handwriting'. Suggestions: correct verb phrases, word order, and use appropriate negative future construction 'won't' for intentions.