打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one specific reason, and add a brief supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar (e.g., 'I am a software engineering student' and 'my handwriting is poor').

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting. As a software engineering student, I type most of my work, so I’m faster and more accurate on a keyboard. Because of this, I rarely write by hand and my handwriting has become quite poor.

建議: Correct sentence structure and remove filler words. Give one clear statement (laptop), then a concise reason with coherent grammar and a linking word. Avoid unnecessary repetitions like 'every day' multiple times.

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I code on my laptop for classes and projects. As a result, the keyboard is essential for my daily work and study.

建議: Give a clear time frame and one specific method you used. Avoid hesitations and irrelevant comments. Use linking words to structure the answer (e.g., 'Initially... Later...'). Provide a concrete example of an app or website if possible.

範例: I learned to type when I was about 12, using an online typing program. Initially I practiced basic lessons, and later I improved by playing typing games on websites like TypingClub, which made practice fun and kept me motivated.

建議: Be specific about the practice method and frequency, and use correct collocations (e.g., 'timing' → 'speed and accuracy'). State one clear routine and its benefit, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing on a typing app for 20 minutes every day, focusing on speed and accuracy. Because the app includes game-like exercises, I stay motivated and gradually increase my words-per-minute score.

× I prefer typing 100% because I am such software engineering student, so I prefer typing.

✓ I prefer typing 100% because I am a software engineering student, so I prefer typing.

The student omitted the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun phrase 'software engineering student'. Use 'a' before a singular countable noun when mentioning it for the first time. Also 'such' is unnecessary here; remove it for natural English. Suggestion: Use 'a' + singular countable noun: 'I am a software engineering student.'

× Of course I always type a laptop keyboard every day.

✓ Of course I always type on a laptop keyboard every day.

The verb 'type' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to the device used. Omitting 'on' makes the sentence ungrammatical. Also 'a laptop keyboard' is fine, but the correct preposition is needed. Suggestion: Use 'type on a ...' for the device: 'I always type on a laptop keyboard.'

× Uh because I am software engineer student so I'm have to write a code every day and lend a code everyday.

✓ Uh, because I am a software engineer student, I have to write code every day and send code every day.

Missing article 'a' before 'software engineer student' and incorrect auxiliary 'I'm have to' (should be 'I have to'). 'Write code' and 'send code' are uncountable/idiomatic; using 'a' with 'code' is incorrect. 'Lend a code' is unnatural; likely intended 'send' or 'lend' is wrong. Also repeat 'every day' once. Suggestion: Use 'a' for singular professions and use 'have to' for obligation: 'I am a software engineer student, so I have to write code every day and send code.'

× So ma the keyboard is very essential for me to write the code.

✓ So the keyboard is very essential for me to write code.

Typo 'ma' should be removed. 'The keyboard' is acceptable if referring to the keyboard mentioned earlier, but 'write the code' is unnatural; use 'write code' (general activity) without 'the'. Suggestion: Remove typos and use uncountable 'code' when referring to programming in general.

× Umm did have the application, I bet I forgot about the name.

✓ Umm there was an application; I think I forgot the name.

Original mixes auxiliary 'did' with 'have' incorrectly and has awkward phrasing. Use 'there was' or 'I had' depending on meaning; here 'there was an application' is natural. 'I bet' is informal; 'I think' is clearer. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'there was' and simpler connector: 'There was an application; I think I forgot the name.'

× And you have to type and and you can also play play the game like typing.

✓ And you have to type, and you can also play games like typing games.

Repetition 'and and' and 'play play' are errors/typos. 'Play the game like typing' is ungrammatical; use 'play games' or 'play typing games'. Suggestion: Remove duplicates and use plural 'games' or specify 'typing games': 'you can also play typing games.'

× And nowadays there are many websites to learn the typing and you have to fend off boring because it is a game.

✓ Nowadays there are many websites to learn typing, and you don't get bored because it is a game.

'Learn the typing' incorrectly uses the definite article; use 'learn typing'. 'Fend off boring' is incorrect phrasing; use 'don't get bored'. 'Many' is fine. Also add 'a' before 'game'. Suggestion: Use idiomatic expressions: 'learn typing' and 'don't get bored.'

× I train my timing gear on that application every day and that application is not boring because it include also include the game session so I like playing games.

✓ I train my timing skills on that application every day, and that application is not boring because it also includes game sessions, so I like playing games.

Several issues: 'timing gear' is incorrect; likely 'timing skills' or 'timing practice'. 'Include' needs third-person singular 'includes' to agree with 'that application'. Repetition 'include also include' is error. Plural 'sessions' fits better. Use commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'skills' and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'it also includes game sessions.'

× So this is 2 in one for me.

✓ So this is two-in-one for me.

Use hyphenated 'two-in-one' as a compound adjective/noun; write the number as word 'two' in formal writing. Original '2 in one' is informal and numeric in spoken transcript; correct grammatical form is 'two-in-one.' Suggestion: Use 'two-in-one' or 'two in one' (hyphen preferred) to express combined benefits.