打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, accuracy and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Keep to 1–3 concise sentences and give a brief specific reason. Use linking words if adding detail (for example: because, so).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it makes my work much easier. My handwriting isn’t very neat, so typing helps me finish tasks faster and produce clearer documents.

建議: Make sentences grammatically correct and more concise. State the main answer directly, then give one specific detail about frequency or reason. Use plural/singular forms correctly and link ideas simply (for example: because, so, therefore).

範例: Yes, I use both a laptop and a desktop almost every day because my job as an accountant requires different software and screens for different tasks.

建議: Clarify timeline and information; avoid unclear or irrelevant words. Give a direct time reference (e.g., at age X, in grade Y, or in year Z) and one brief supporting detail. Correct pronouns and proper nouns and keep sentences coherent.

範例: I learned to type when I was in about grade 6 in Thailand, and I improved my skills further during high school by practicing regularly on the computer.

建議: Use clear, well-formed sentences and correct verb tenses. Describe one or two concrete methods of practice and their effects, using linking words (for example: first, then, afterwards). Avoid unclear phrases like 'charmed myself.'

範例: At first I played typing games to learn the keys, and later I practiced timed typing tests to increase my speed and accuracy. I also copy short articles to improve my consistency and measure my progress.

× I prefer typing in particular because it make my job much more easier.

✓ I prefer typing in particular because it makes my job much easier.

The verb 'make' must agree with the third-person singular subject 'it', so use 'makes'. Also 'much more easier' is redundant: use either 'much easier' or 'more easy', so 'much easier' is correct.

× I'm I would say my handwriting was in that good, so I prefer typing.

✓ I would say my handwriting was not that good, so I prefer typing.

The original contains extra 'I'm' and incorrect word order. Remove 'I'm' and use the negative 'not that good' to express poor handwriting. The corrected sentence uses proper structure and meaning.

× Yes I do. I do using a lot of both laptop and desktop basis on my job as an accountant.

✓ Yes, I do. I use both a laptop and a desktop a lot for my job as an accountant.

Use the simple present 'use' rather than 'do using'. Also 'both laptop and desktop' needs articles and clearer order: 'both a laptop and a desktop'. 'Basis on my job' is incorrect preposition use; 'for my job' is correct.

× Most of my works got to be done by using computer.

✓ Most of my work has to be done using a computer.

'Work' is uncountable here, so use singular 'work' not 'works'. Use 'has to be done' to express obligation/necessity, and include 'a' before 'computer' or omit 'a' for plural general: 'using a computer' is natural.

× I learned how to use the keyboard.

✓ I learned how to use a keyboard.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'the keyboard' sounds specific; in context 'a keyboard' is more natural. Tense remains simple past as the learning occurred in the past.

× Zine Eye was in high school when I was studying at my high school in Thailand.

✓ I was in high school in Thailand when I learned it.

Original repeats 'high school' and uses a name 'Zine Eye' unclear. Simplify to a clear subject and time: 'I was in high school in Thailand when I learned it.' This fixes redundancy and unclear phrasing.

× He started UMM learning how to dive at around grade 6.

✓ I started learning how to type around grade 6.

Pronoun 'He' and word 'dive' appear incorrect and inconsistent with earlier context. Replace with first-person 'I' and correct verb 'type'. Remove 'UMM' which seems extraneous. Use 'around grade 6' to indicate approximate time.

× I used to play typing games a lot when I was starting to learning how to type and after that I tried to I challenge myself by typing things quicker and sometime I even charmed myself to see whether I improve.

✓ I used to play typing games a lot when I was starting to learn how to type, and after that I tried to challenge myself by typing faster; sometimes I even tested myself to see whether I had improved.

Multiple issues: 'starting to learning' should be 'starting to learn' (infinitive form). 'I tried to I challenge' has an extra 'I' — remove it. Use 'typing faster' instead of 'typing things quicker' (adverb placement and word choice). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Charmed myself' is incorrect collocation; use 'tested myself'. Also use past perfect 'had improved' to show improvement after practice.