打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然和直接，先给出明确立场，然后用一到两句具体理由支持。注意语法和词汇使用，避免冗长重复。可以用连接词如 "because" 和 "so" 来组织句子。练习表达时注意时态和冠词，改正常见错误（如 "more faster" 应为 "faster"）。

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas more clearly, so I study more effectively.

建議: 开头要直接回应问题，然后给出具体原因和简短例子。注意动词形式（如 "I don't usually type"），并避免重复（"practical" 和 "user friendly" 可择一）。使用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 提高连贯性。

範例: No, I don't usually type on a desktop or laptop. I mainly use my iPad because it's more convenient and portable, and the touchscreen keyboard is quick enough for writing emails or notes.

建議: 回答要用正确的时间表达（如 "when I was in primary school"），并用一两句说明学习背景。注意语法：使用复数和冠词正确（"students at school"，"every student"）。用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. In our computer lessons every student had to practise typing, so I learned basic skills like touch-typing and accuracy.

建議: 给出具体的方法和例子，避免模糊和重复（如 "in my opinion" 只需用一次）。注意语法（"different people"，"every day"，"more correctly" 不自然）。使用连接词如 "for example" 或 "by" 来列举练习方法。

範例: I improve my typing by practising every day for at least 20 minutes. For example, I use online typing tests to increase speed and accuracy, and I copy short texts in both Chinese and English to get used to different keyboards.

× I prefer handwriting rather than typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing.

句中 prefer 后面搭配应使用“prefer A to B”结构，而不是“rather than”。建议使用“prefer handwriting to typing”更地道。

× In my case I think I use the handwriting camera more faster than using typing 'cause I didn't practice very well of the typing so.

✓ In my case, I think I write by hand faster than I type because I haven't practiced typing very well.

原句中“more faster”是冗余比较（比较级 faster 前不应加 more）。‘handwriting camera’表意不清，应改为‘write by hand’或‘handwriting’；‘using typing’用法错误，应改为‘I type’；‘didn't practice very well of the typing’结构不自然，应改为‘I haven't practiced typing very well’以表示至今练习不足。

× No, I'm not usually type on the desktop or laptop keyboard every day.

✓ No, I don't usually type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.

原句中主语与谓语结构混乱，应使用一般现在时的否定形式“do not/does not + 动词原形”。“I'm not usually type”是不正确的词序和助动词使用，改为“I don't usually type”符合语法。

× I usually use iPad rather than laptop or desktop because I think iPad is more practical and easy to use which is more user friendly for typing and entering the information.

✓ I usually use an iPad rather than a laptop or desktop because I think the iPad is more practical and easier to use and more user-friendly for typing and entering information.

需要注意：使用冠词“an iPad, a laptop”；“more practical and easy to use”中“easy”应改为比较级“easier”以与“more practical”并列；“user friendly”应连写或用连字符“user-friendly”；“entering the information”中的定冠词可省略为“entering information”。

× I learned how to type on a keyboard since I was a primary school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.

表示过去某一时间点开始学会某事，应使用过去式并用 when 引导时间状语“when I was in primary school”。不能用 since + 过去式。

× Students as at school have the criteria to learn how to type the keyboard.

✓ Students at school are required to learn how to type on the keyboard.

原句结构混乱，“have the criteria to”用法不自然；更常见表达为“are required to”或“have to learn”。并且搭配应为“type on the keyboard”。

× So in computer lessons every students need to learn how to type and entering the words.

✓ So in computer lessons every student needs to learn how to type and enter words.

主谓一致：every student（单数）应搭配 needs（第三人称单数）；并列动词应使用相同形式：learn how to type and enter（动词原形并列），而不是“and entering”。去掉“the”更自然。

× I think different peoples have their own opinion and practice skills, but in my opinion I think practice makes perfect.

✓ I think different people have their own opinions and practice skills, but in my opinion, practice makes perfect.

people 是不可数复数形式，不应写成 peoples；opinion 一般用复数 opinions 指不同人的看法；句中重复“I think... in my opinion”较累赘，可保留一个。

× I will use the keyboard for every days like practising for Chinese words, English words from faster speeds and more correctly entertaining of the wordings.

✓ I will use the keyboard every day to practice Chinese and English words, typing faster and more accurately.

every day 不可写为 every days（单数）；“practising for Chinese words, English words”表达不自然，改为“to practice Chinese and English words”；“from faster speeds and more correctly entertaining of the wordings”语义混乱，应改为“typing faster and more accurately”。