打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition; use correct grammar (e.g., 'easier' not 'more easy') and add a brief specific example to support your preference. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use a linking word to connect reasons.

範例: I prefer typing because it’s easier and more convenient, especially when I need to erase or revise text. For example, I can quickly edit reports on my laptop and use spell-check to avoid mistakes.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and simplify the structure. Correct subject-verb agreement and reduce redundancy. Add a concise detail about what you type and why it requires daily use, using a linking word for coherence.

範例: Yes, I type every day on my laptop because I prepare daily data reports. These reports record every transaction, so I need to enter and check figures regularly.

建議: Give a direct answer first (e.g., 'I learned in high school'), correct tense and article usage, and provide one specific detail about the course or activity that helped you learn typing. Use a linking word to connect the reason.

範例: I learned to type in high school when we had a computer class. In that course we practiced typing while completing assignments and reports, which improved my speed.

建議: Answer directly about current or past strategies to improve typing, use correct grammar and avoid vague language ('maybe'). Mention specific practice methods (e.g., timed exercises, online tutors) and link cause and effect clearly.

範例: I improved my typing during my final year of college because I had to write an individual research project. To get faster I practiced daily with online typing exercises and timed tests, which helped me reduce errors and increase speed.

× I prefer typing because it's more easy or convenient to use, specially when I need something to erase or revise.

✓ I prefer typing because it's easier and more convenient to use, especially when I need to erase or revise something.

Use 'easier' (comparative adjective) not 'more easy'. 'Especially' is correct spelling instead of 'specially'. Place 'something' after the verbs 'erase or revise' for natural word order. Also use parallel adjectives 'easier and more convenient'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× So it's more easy and convenient.

✓ So it's easier and more convenient.

Use the comparative form 'easier' rather than 'more easy'. Keep parallel structure by using 'easier and more convenient'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Yes I do because every day I make data report about my work which is we collect data from every transaction that we have.

✓ Yes, I do because every day I make data reports about my work; we collect data from every transaction we have.

Pluralize 'report' to 'reports' to match 'every day' and repeated actions. Remove the awkward relative clause 'which is' and use a clear clause 'we collect data from every transaction we have.' Add a semicolon (or conjunction) to connect the two related ideas. Ensure subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I'm not sure, but maybe in my high school year I learned it because we have subject in computer and at the same time we also use computer to make our assignments and reports.

✓ I'm not sure, but maybe in my high school years I learned it because we had a computer subject, and at the same time we also used computers to do our assignments and reports.

Use past tense ('had', 'used') because the action occurred in the past. Use plural 'high school years' or 'my final year' for natural phrasing. 'Subject in computer' should be 'a computer subject' or 'computer class'. Use 'computers' plural when speaking generally and 'do our assignments' is more natural than 'make'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Maybe when I'm on my last year in college because we have research individually so I need to put more on focus on typing and do it by myself and maybe that's the one reason I know how to type.

✓ Maybe in my last year of college, because we had to do research individually, I needed to focus more on typing and do it myself; maybe that's one reason I learned how to type.

Shift tense consistently to past ('had to do', 'needed', 'learned') because discussing a past period. Use 'in my last year of college' instead of 'when I'm on my last year'. 'Put more on focus' is incorrect; use 'focus more'. 'Do it by myself' can be 'do it myself'. Maintain clear clause connections. Grammar problem type ID: 6