打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one concise reason with a specific example. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

範例: I prefer handwriting. Because writing by hand helps me remember ideas better, I often take handwritten notes in meetings; for example, I can visualise the layout of my notes which makes it easier to recall important points later.

建議: Correct minor grammar and reduce redundancy. Give a clear topic sentence, then support with a specific detail about travel and convenience. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' appropriately.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because my job involves visiting clients in different locations. Therefore, a laptop is more convenient to carry and lets me work from anywhere, such as in cafés or client offices.

建議: Avoid filler words and correct grammar. Give a clear time reference, explain briefly why it was taught, and provide one specific effect. Use linking words like 'so' or 'which' for coherence.

範例: I learned to type in elementary school because typing was a mandatory subject. As a result, I became comfortable with computers early on, which later made schoolwork and online tasks much easier.

建議: Remove hesitations and correct tense. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific method and result. Mention particular exercises or progress to be more convincing.

範例: In university I improved my typing with an online course on typing.com. I practised daily lessons and timed tests, which increased my speed and allowed me to finish homework more quickly.

× Actually I prefer handwriting because when you write something down, it will help you to remember it more clearly, and when you recall what you wrote later and you can remember, you can remember it as a picture.

✓ Actually I prefer handwriting because when you write something down, it helps you remember it more clearly, and when you recall what you wrote later, you can remember it as a picture.

The modal 'will' is unnecessary for general truths or habits; use present simple 'helps' (Grammar problem type ID 6: Present tense issue). Also the repeated phrase 'you can remember' is redundant; remove duplication and add a comma before the final clause for clarity. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual or general statements and avoid repetition.'

× I tap on a laptop every day because my job requires me to travel between different place to visit different client.

✓ I use a laptop every day because my job requires me to travel between different places to visit different clients.

The verb choice 'tap on a laptop' is colloquial and awkward; 'use a laptop' is more natural. 'Place' and 'client' should be plural to agree with 'different' (Grammar problem type ID 1: Singular and plural issue and ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors). Suggestion: ensure nouns that follow 'different' are plural and use appropriate verbs for the context.'

× So it will be more convenient for me to bring a laptop and type in the laptop.

✓ So it is more convenient for me to bring a laptop and type on it.

Use 'type on' rather than 'type in' when referring to using a keyboard; avoid repeating 'the laptop' by using the pronoun 'it' (Grammar problem type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns). Suggestion: use correct prepositions with common verbs and replace redundant nouns with pronouns.'

× Oh, actually I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school.

✓ Oh, actually I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense and needs no change. It correctly uses past simple to refer to a past event (Grammar problem type ID 5: Past tense issue). Suggestion: no change required.'

× We learned it because it's kind of a a mandatory courses for elementary school and it helps me a lot and opens the window for me to computer.

✓ We learned it because it's kind of a mandatory course in elementary school, and it helped me a lot and opened the window to computers for me.

'a a mandatory courses' has an article and plural mismatch; use singular 'a mandatory course' or plural without 'a'. Also tense consistency: speaking about past learning should use past 'helped' and 'opened' (Grammar problem type ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers, ID 22: Article errors, and ID 5: Past tense issue). 'to computer' is incorrect; use 'to computers' or 'to using computers' (Grammar problem type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestion: ensure article-number agreement and keep verb tenses consistent when referring to past events.'

× Why I was in university, I used a website calledtyping.com to improve my typing.

✓ When I was at university, I used a website called typing.com to improve my typing.

The initial word 'Why' is incorrect; use 'When' to indicate time. Also use 'at university' (common collocation) and add a space in 'called typing.com' (Grammar problem type ID 26: Sentence structure errors and ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestion: use correct temporal conjunctions and common prepositional phrases.'

× Uh, the reason I searched for this uh, website is that I want to improve my typing skills so I can finish my, uh, my homework faster and the website is really helpful.

✓ The reason I searched for this website was that I wanted to improve my typing skills so I could finish my homework faster, and the website was really helpful.

Maintain past tense consistency: searching happened in the past, so use past modals 'wanted' and 'could' instead of present 'want' and 'can' (Grammar problem type ID 4: Modal verb usage and ID 5: Past tense issue). Also remove stuttering 'uh' and duplicate 'my'. Suggestion: match tense across related clauses and use past modals when describing past intentions and abilities.'