打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然、语法正确并且简洁。可用一两句直接陈述偏好，接着用一两句具体说明原因并举例。注意语法（例如“makes me more unforgettable”应改为“helps me remember better”），避免重复和模糊表述。可以用连接词如“because”或“so”把原因和结果连起来。

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take handwritten notes during lectures I review them later and recall details more easily than when I type.

建議: 回答要完整且句子通顺，避免重复和断句错误。先直接回答（desktop or laptop），然后说明原因并给具体细节（比如每天打字的用途或练习方式）。纠正词汇和搭配（例如“everyday”应为“every day”，“typing speed”而不是重复短语）。

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I practice for typing-based exams. For instance, I spend about 30 minutes daily on typing exercises to improve my accuracy and speed.

建議: 回答要更符合时态和句子结构，先直接给出时间点，然后用一两句补充细节。注意时态一致（例如用过去式描述过去发生的事），并使用连接词（like when, because, so）使表达更连贯。可以具体说明学到的技能或课程时长。

範例: I learned to type when I was in junior high school. We had a computer class where the teacher showed us proper finger placement and exercises to increase our typing speed.

建議: 回答要具体说明使用哪些方法或资源，并说明效果如何。避免重复词汇（如“more more quickly and and frequency”），改用准确表达（例如“faster and more accurate”或“increase my speed and accuracy”）。可以提到练习频率和具体练习类型。

範例: I improve my typing by using a practice app called Jingle and by doing timed drills every day. This helps me increase both my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer handwriting because I think it can makes me more unforgettable what I write on the paper.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I think it can make what I write on paper more unforgettable.

句中“can makes”动词形式错误。情态动词“can”后应接动词原形“make”，而不是第三人称单数形式“makes”。另外，英语中常把“on paper”作为固定搭配，不用加定冠词“the”，并将“more unforgettable”放在被修饰短语之后更自然。改正建议：情态动词后用动词原形；把介词短语和修饰词放在适当位置。

× I can remember it for a long time, but typing can't let me delete.

✓ I can remember it for a long time, but when typing I can't delete it.

原句中代词和句子结构不清晰。“typing can't let me delete”这种表达不自然，建议用“when typing I can't delete it”或“I can't delete what I typed”更清楚。将代词“it”放在动词后并明确主语有助于表达。

× I always type on the. I always type on laptop keyboard everyday because I need to exercise for preparing the items exam.

✓ I always type on a laptop keyboard every day because I need to practice to prepare for the exam.

原句有断句、冠词、词序和搭配错误。“type on the.”是残缺句；“laptop keyboard”前需要冠词“a”；“everyday”作形容词，表示“日常的”，应使用副词短语“every day”；“exercise for preparing the items exam”不自然，应改为“practice to prepare for the exam”。改正建议：检查完整句子；区分everyday与every day；练习常见动词搭配（practice, prepare for）。

× So I usually exercise my. My speed typing speed.

✓ So I usually practice my typing speed.

原句“exercise my.”是残缺且搭配错误，应使用“practice”来表达“练习”，并将“typing speed”合并为一个短语。“my speed typing speed”重复且语序错误。改正建议：避免重复，使用正确动词搭配（practice + 名词）。

× It definitely when I was a junior high school student, we have a class to use computer and teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard and how to improve our speed.

✓ I definitely learned it when I was a junior high school student. We had a class to use computers and the teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard and how to improve our speed.

原句句子结构混乱，时态不一致。第一部分缺少动词，应为“I definitely learned it when...”动作发生在过去，随后句子应使用过去时“had”和“taught”。“use computer”应改为复数“use computers”或“use a computer”，并且“teacher”前需加定冠词“the”或不定冠词“a”。改正建议：保持时态一致（过去时），补全缺失动词，注意冠词和可数名词的单复数。

× I usually use some app to improve my typing like Jingle.

✓ I usually use an app to improve my typing, such as Jingle.

“some app”不太自然，改为不定冠词“an app”。列举例子时用“such as”或“like”后接应用名。改正建议：把可数名词用适当冠词，并用恰当连接词引出例子。

× It makes my typing more more quickly and and frequency.

✓ It makes my typing faster and more accurate/frequent.

原句有重复词“more more”与“and and”，并且“quickly”是副词不能直接修饰名词“typing”，应使用形容词“fast”或“faster”。“frequency”是名词，不适合此处；根据语境应为“more frequent”或“more accurate”。改正建议：去掉重复，选择正确词性（副词vs形容词），根据意思用“faster”或“more accurate/frequent”。