打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and use the correct term (typing vs handwriting). Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because / so). Keep it under five sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I enjoy seeing how different styles reflect personality. For example, my friends’ neat, rounded letters look calm, while slanted writing seems more energetic. Therefore, handwriting feels more personal to me.

建議: Answer directly, correct word choice, and organize reasons with linking words (because / so / therefore). Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Use 2–3 concise sentences explaining availability and comfort.

範例: I usually use my laptop keyboard because I don't have a desktop at home. Also, my laptop is more comfortable and convenient to carry, so I prefer typing on it most days.

建議: Begin with a clear time expression, reduce hesitations, and give a brief reason or context. Use linking words like because or when, and choose correct nouns (computer class). Keep it to two sentences maximum.

範例: I learned to type in primary school when we had a computer class. The class taught basic computer skills, including how to use the keyboard and type simple documents.

建議: State your main method clearly, then give specific practice techniques with linking words (for example, by / such as). Use correct verbs and nouns (practice, typing speed, accuracy, copy typing, timed tests). Limit to three sentences.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I copy short articles or fairy tales and do timed typing tests to increase speed and accuracy. I also use online typing exercises to track my progress.

× I definitely prefer type handwriting because I love my handwriting because I can see all of the people have different personality depends on the styles of handwriting so.

✓ I definitely prefer handwriting because I love my handwriting; you can see that people have different personalities depending on their handwriting styles.

The original contains awkward word choices and adjective/adverb misuse ('type handwriting', 'different personality depends on the styles'). Replace 'type handwriting' with 'handwriting', use plural 'personalities' for people, and change 'depends on' to the correct participial phrase 'depending on'. Also split the long clause and add a linking phrase for clarity. Ensure verb agreement and correct noun forms.

× I usually type with my laptop keyboard because I don't really have my desktop on my on my house and and it's it's more comfortable if I use leftover because it's stick together in one's green and a keyboard together. So I prefer definitely prefer laptop keyboard.

✓ I usually type on my laptop keyboard because I don't have a desktop at home, and it's more comfortable to use a laptop since the screen and keyboard are attached. So I definitely prefer a laptop keyboard.

Errors include preposition and phrasing issues and verb forms ('type with' -> 'type on', 'on my house' -> 'at home'). 'Don't really have' simplified to 'don't have'. 'It's stick together' is ungrammatical; use 'are attached' to describe screen and keyboard. Added article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. Corrected doubled words and improved sentence flow.

× Uh, I think I started when I was in primary school because there's a lecture called computer, which is we, which is how to teach you how, how can we use to the computer and the system and how to write using type of keyboard. So.

✓ I think I started when I was in primary school because there was a class called Computer, which taught us how to use the computer and its system and how to type on a keyboard.

Use past tense 'there was' to match 'started'. 'Lecture called computer' -> 'class called Computer'. Remove redundant and incorrect phrasing ('which is we, which is how to teach you how, how can we use to the computer'). Use 'taught us' and 'type on a keyboard' for correct verb and preposition usage.

× I just practice a lot to improve my type, speed and to be accurate. I always follow or write some relays that I love or writing some fairy tale to accurate improve the accuracy and speed.

✓ I just practice a lot to improve my typing speed and accuracy. I often copy or write passages I enjoy, like fairy tales, to improve both accuracy and speed.

'Improve my type, speed' should be 'improve my typing speed' (use noun form). 'To be accurate' -> 'accuracy'. 'Follow or write some relays' is unclear; 'copy or write passages' is appropriate. Use gerund/noun forms for activities that improve skills and correct word order. Removed redundancy and corrected word choice.