打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "save a lot of time", "export it as a PDF"). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more practical. For example, I can save a lot of time and easily export documents as PDFs to share with colleagues. Also, typing helps me keep my notes neat and searchable.

建議: Combine short sentences into a fluent response and use linking words. Correct grammar issues ('works vary', avoid sentence fragments). Give one clear topic sentence then 1–2 specific examples of tasks to justify your answer.

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because my work is mobile and I often need to work away from an office. For instance, I write emails, finish song arrangements, and prepare curricula for our music school, so a laptop is much more convenient.

建議: Keep the answer natural and coherent: lead with the time, then briefly describe the memorable detail using linking words. Fix grammar and phrasing ('between my friends and me', 'it was a fun way to learn'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I learned to type in elementary school. We used a typing game where a shark would 'bite' slow typists, so my classmates and I competed to type faster — it was a fun and effective way to learn.

建議: This is a strong answer; make it slightly more concise and add a linking word to connect ideas. Include one specific example (frequency or a named website/app) to increase specificity.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day, especially because I had to take notes in fast lectures. For example, I use online typing tests and timed note-taking exercises (about 20 minutes daily) to build both speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing rather than writing because my typing skills are way better than handwriting skills and with typing I can save so many time and after I type I can export it as a PDF as a document to send it to other people for projects and tasks.

✓ I prefer typing rather than writing because my typing skills are much better than my handwriting skills, and with typing I can save a lot of time, and after I type I can export it as a PDF document to send to other people for projects and tasks.

Errors: missing articles and awkward quantifier wording. Use 'my handwriting skills' for possessive parallelism. Replace 'so many time' with 'a lot of time' (correct quantifier and countability). Remove redundant 'as' in 'as a PDF as a document' and use 'a PDF document'. Use commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× I type on the laptop keyboard every day. Because my work is mobile, the laptop keyboard is very helpful to finish my work.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my work is mobile; the laptop keyboard is very helpful for finishing my work.

Errors: article and sentence fragment. Use 'a laptop keyboard' (article) and combine fragment 'Because...' with main clause. Use 'helpful for finishing' (gerund) or 'helpful in finishing' for natural expression.

× My works are vary from sending emails, finishing a song and creating a curriculum for our music school.

✓ My work varies from sending emails and finishing a song to creating a curriculum for our music school.

Errors: pluralization and verb agreement. 'Work' is an uncountable noun here, so use singular 'work' and the singular verb 'varies'. Also correct preposition use by saying 'varies from... to...' and add 'and' for list clarity.

× Having laptop is very helpful for me.

✓ Having a laptop is very helpful for me.

Error: missing indefinite article. Use 'a laptop' when referring to a non-specific single laptop.

× I started learning to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school.

✓ I started learning to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence tense is correct for past action. (Included for completeness.)

× There was a game, it was a short game that will bite us if we type slow, so we need to type very fast so we were not bitten by the sharks.

✓ There was a short game that would bite us if we typed slowly, so we needed to type very fast to avoid being bitten by the sharks.

Errors: tense consistency and adverb form. Use past modal 'would' and past tense 'typed' and 'needed' to match the past context. Use adverb 'slowly' not adjective 'slow', and 'to avoid being bitten' is a clearer passive infinitive.

× And we like to have a competition between my friends and I, so it was a very fun education.

✓ We liked to have competitions between my friends and me, so it was a very fun learning experience.

Errors: pronoun case and word choice. Use object form 'me' after 'between'. Use past tense 'liked' to match context. Replace 'education' with 'learning experience' for natural collocation and change 'a competition' to plural 'competitions' if recurring.

× I improve my typing by practicing every day because in college I have to take notes during fast-paced lectures.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day because in college I have to take notes during fast-paced lectures.

No grammatical correction needed; present simple used for habitual action is appropriate. (Included for completeness.)

× I also use online typing tests and time note taking exercises to build both my speed and accuracy.

✓ I also use online typing tests and timed note-taking exercises to build both my speed and accuracy.

Errors: incorrect word form and hyphenation. Use 'timed' (adjective) instead of 'time', and hyphenate 'note-taking'. This corrects the modifier and makes the phrase idiomatic.