打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (plural/singular, word order). Keep answer concise (max 5 sentences). Add one specific example and use linking words (for example, moreover).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly search and organize emails and documents on my laptop. Moreover, digital files are easy to edit and share with colleagues, which saves time when collaborating.

建議: Avoid filler words (uh, um) and watch collocations (prepare reports and communicate). Provide one brief detail about typical tasks to show specificity and use linking word (for example, therefore).

範例: Yes, I type every day. As a marketer, I regularly send emails and prepare reports on my laptop; for example, I draft campaign summaries and update performance spreadsheets, so clear typing is essential.

建議: Be more precise and correct phrasing (e.g., "I think it was in high school"). Remove hesitations and unnecessary phrases. Add one concrete detail about what you practiced and link ideas with because/so.

範例: I think I learned to type in high school when my teacher introduced keyboard lessons. She emphasized accuracy and speed, so I practiced typing exercises and short essays regularly to improve.

建議: Use precise vocabulary ("timing skill" → "typing speed"). Avoid filler words and combine sentences for coherence using linking words (firstly/secondly; additionally). Add a specific course or exercise as an example to show concreteness.

範例: I improve my typing in two ways. Firstly, I practice typing 20 minutes every day using online speed tests to build speed; secondly, I take an online touch-typing course that teaches proper finger placement and accuracy.

× I can quickly track emails and document on my laptop or smartphone.

✓ I can quickly track emails and documents on my laptop or smartphone.

The noun 'document' is countable and should be plural 'documents' to match 'emails' and the intended meaning. Use plural when referring to multiple items of the same type.

× Additionally, online, umm, documents is easier to edit and share with others.

✓ Additionally, online documents are easier to edit and share with others.

The subject 'documents' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subjects take plural verbs.

× As a marketer, I have to, uh, send emails regularly to my partners and colleagues, so I use my laptop to, uh, prepare reports and uh, communication with others daily.

✓ As a marketer, I have to send emails to my partners and colleagues regularly, so I use my laptop to prepare reports and communicate with others daily.

'Communication' is a noun; here a verb 'communicate' is required to match parallel structure with 'prepare'. Also word order: place adverb 'regularly' after the verb phrase or at sentence end for clarity. Remove filler words.

× Honestly I don't remember the exact year but it's surround it was UMM in high school.

✓ Honestly, I don't remember the exact year, but it was around then in high school.

The original has unclear wording and wrong verb phrase 'it's surround it was UMM'. Use past tense 'was' and the phrase 'around then' to indicate approximate time. Also capitalize and remove fillers.

× My teacher taught me these skills and she said that it would be an essential skill for me in the future so I had to practice regularly.

✓ My teacher taught me these skills and said that they would be essential for my future, so I had to practice regularly.

Mismatch between plural 'these skills' and singular 'it would be an essential skill' — change to plural 'they' and 'essential' for consistency. Simplify 'for me in the future' to 'for my future'. Maintain tense consistency.

× Well, I improve my timing skill in two main ways.

✓ Well, I improve my typing skills in two main ways.

The student likely meant 'typing skills' not 'timing skill'. 'Typing' is the correct gerund noun; use plural 'skills' to match 'two main ways'. Ensure word choice reflects intended meaning.

× Firstly, I practice typing at least 20 minutes daily to build speed.

✓ Firstly, I practice typing for at least 20 minutes daily to build speed.

When expressing duration, include the preposition 'for' before the time period: 'for 20 minutes'. This is standard collocation for time duration.