打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence stating preference, then give two concise, specific reasons connected by linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and grammar errors (e.g., "it is not clear to old" and "I was at starting"). Use correct verb forms and articles.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is hard to read. Also, typing is faster and makes it easier to edit and share documents, so I usually type essays and notes on my laptop.

建議: Answer the question directly (desktop or laptop or neither) with a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly why using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "I don't know type" -> "I don't type") and capitalize properly. Give one concrete detail about your routine.

範例: I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I usually write notes by hand at college because most of my classes encourage handwritten work, so I only type at home when I need to write assignments.

建議: Give a clear time reference in one sentence, then add a brief supporting detail about how or where you learned. Remove filler phrases like "Well, I don't remember, but I think so." and correct small errors ("learned how to type on a keyboard").

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard in eighth grade at school. Our computer class taught touch-typing basics, and we practiced with typing exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

建議: This is a good content answer; make it more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence about how you improve, then give one or two specific methods with linking words and a short example. Use correct collocations ("improve typing speed and accuracy").

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online lessons and typing games to build speed and accuracy. For example, I use a website that gives timed drills and tracks my progress, so I can see improvements each week.

× I usually prefer typing because of my handwriting.

✓ I usually prefer typing because my handwriting is messy.

The original sentence uses 'because of my handwriting' which is grammatical but vague. Rewriting as 'because my handwriting is messy' uses an adjective to describe the handwriting and makes the reason explicit and natural in English.

× It is not clear to old because I was at starting it was poor.

✓ It was not clear before because, at the start, it was poor.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear time expressions. 'At the start' is the correct phrase; 'old' is wrong here. Use past tense 'was' consistently and place time expressions ('at the start', 'before') in correct positions.

× I prefer typing because it is a computer technical and it's all understanding is also well.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easier on a computer and more legible.

The original uses incorrect phrases ('computer technical', 'it's all understanding is also well'). Replace with natural adjectives: 'easier on a computer' and 'more legible' to convey that typed text is clearer and easier to read.

× Being a student, I don't know type on desktop or a laptop keyboard every day because I usually go College in my daily routine and we usually write the handwritten notes.

✓ As a student, I don't type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I usually go to college and we usually write handwritten notes.

The original has missing infinitive 'to type', missing preposition 'to college', unnecessary article 'the' before 'handwritten notes', and awkward use of 'Being a student'. Correct modal/verb forms and prepositions for natural expression.

× When I was in the eighth grade, I learned to how to type on keyboard in my school.

✓ When I was in the eighth grade, I learned how to type on the keyboard at my school.

Remove the extra 'to' before 'how', add the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard', and use the preposition 'at' for institutions: 'at my school'.

× I practice typing regularly using online lessons and typing games on building and speed and accuracy.

✓ I practice typing regularly using online lessons and typing games to build speed and accuracy.

The phrase 'on building and speed and accuracy' is incorrect. Use 'to build speed and accuracy' to show purpose. Present tense 'practice' is correct; adjust the verb complement for clarity.

× For example, I usually play the games of typing speed.

✓ For example, I usually play typing speed games.

The original phrase 'the games of typing speed' is awkward. Use the compound noun 'typing speed games' or 'typing games' for natural English word order.