打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct minor grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then provide one specific reason with a linking phrase. Avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: I prefer handwriting. Although typing is quicker, I enjoy the aesthetic and personal touch of handwritten notes, and I find them more flexible because I can write anywhere without needing a device.

建議: Begin with a direct sentence naming which you use, correct grammar and reduce redundancy. Use a linking word to explain why and give one specific detail about the external keyboard.

範例: I type on a laptop most days because I work as a marketer, but I use an external full-size keyboard because the laptop keys are cramped and uncomfortable for long typing sessions.

建議: Give a clear time reference and avoid filler phrases like "I as I remember" or "I guess." Add one specific detail about the lessons to make your answer more informative.

範例: I learned to type in elementary school during computer class, where the teacher showed us touch-typing techniques and timed exercises to increase our speed.

建議: Start with a direct statement about your method, use correct grammar, and give a concrete example of practice. Avoid vague descriptions like "type a whole novel."

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online exercises and timed drills; for example, I completed daily 20-minute speed tests and transcribed short articles to build accuracy and speed.

× Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard everyday 'cause I work at an office as a marketer, but I have this separate keyboard from the laptop cause a laptop keyboard isn't very convenient. So I need this another full type keyboard.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work in an office as a marketer, but I have a separate keyboard for the laptop because a laptop keyboard isn't very convenient. So I need this full-size keyboard.

Problems: 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb phrase) to indicate frequency; ''cause' is informal and should be 'because' in formal speech; 'at an office' should be 'in an office' for correct preposition use; 'have this separate keyboard from the laptop' is incorrect preposition and article use — use 'a separate keyboard for the laptop'; 'this another full type keyboard' is ungrammatical — use 'a full-size keyboard'. Suggest practicing correct prepositions ('in' for locations like offices, 'for' to indicate purpose/association), avoiding informal contractions in formal responses, and distinguishing 'everyday' vs 'every day'. Stay concise and use standard vocabulary like 'full-size' for keyboards.

× I as I remember I learned how to type on a keyboard at elementary school.

✓ As I remember, I learned how to type on a keyboard in elementary school.

Problems: Redundant 'I as I remember I' creates a sentence structure error; the preposition before 'elementary school' should be 'in' not 'at' for general attendance. Suggestion: Use a single introductory phrase 'As I remember' or 'If I remember correctly' followed by the main clause, and use 'in' with schools when referring to attendance.

× I guess we had this computer class and teacher taught us how to type like in a faster way.

✓ I guess we had a computer class and the teacher taught us how to type more quickly.

Problems: 'this computer class' is awkward article use — use 'a computer class'; 'teacher' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific teacher; 'like in a faster way' is colloquial and ungrammatical — use comparative adverb 'more quickly' or 'faster'. Suggest practicing article use ('a' for nonspecific, 'the' for specific) and forming comparative adverbs correctly (more + adjective or -er/-ly as appropriate).

× And also when handwriting something I like the fact that I could just write everywhere I want.

✓ And also when handwriting something I like the fact that I can just write wherever I want.

Problems: 'could' is past/counterfactual and mismatches present-time preference — use 'can' for present ability; 'everywhere I want' is better expressed as 'wherever I want' for naturalness. Suggestion: Match modal verbs to the time frame (can for present ability) and use 'wherever' for locations rather than 'everywhere' when combined with 'I want'.

× A thing to improve typing, people have to like practice a lot.

✓ To improve typing, people have to practice a lot.

Problems: Word order is awkward and contains filler 'A thing to'; 'have to like practice' incorrectly inserts 'like' as a filler. Suggestion: Use an infinitival introductory phrase 'To improve typing' followed by the main clause, and avoid filler words like 'like' in formal speech.

× So for me I did this typing practice so where we could type a whole novel and a fast speed.

✓ So for me I did typing practice where we could type a whole novel at a fast speed.

Problems: 'did this typing practice so where' is ungrammatical — remove 'this' and 'so' to create correct clause; use preposition 'at' with 'a fast speed' and either 'a fast speed' or better 'a high speed'/'a fast pace'; 'did typing practice' is acceptable but 'practiced typing' is more natural. Suggestion: Prefer 'I practiced typing' or 'I did typing practice' and use 'at a fast speed' for correct preposition.