打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and correct basic grammar (e.g., 'prefer typing', 'most of my work', 'when I'm at home'). Keep response to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing in the office but handwriting at home. In my office most tasks are done on a computer, so typing is faster and more efficient. At home I like to handwrite notes while reading because it helps me remember ideas better.

建議: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer with a concise reason. Begin with the direct answer (e.g., 'Yes, I use a laptop every day'), then add one specific reason. Remove repetition and fillers. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' appropriately.

範例: Yes, I use a laptop every day at work because I am a visa-filing executive and most tasks require portable software and emails. Using a laptop helps me complete tasks faster and manage my time effectively.

建議: This question asks for a time or period—answer that directly first (e.g., 'I learned to type when...'). Then briefly add one specific detail about what you learned and how. Avoid listing vague points and eliminate hesitations and repetition.

範例: I learned to type when I started my first office job about five years ago. Since then typing has helped me notice spelling and grammar errors and improved my ability to form correct sentence structures.

建議: Be specific about methods and results. Start with a direct statement about your main method, then give one or two concrete examples (practice websites, typing exercises, timed tests) and mention the improvement you gained. Remove repetition and correct grammar ('I have taken', 'improve accuracy', 'complete my work on time').

範例: I improve my typing by following structured lessons on YouTube and using online typing platforms like TypingClub for daily practice. After practicing for 20 minutes a day, my speed and accuracy improved and I can complete work tasks more quickly.

× Well, I prefer both and it uh, it depends on the situation.

✓ Well, I prefer both, and it depends on the situation.

Redundant present progressive filler 'it uh, it' interrupts sentence flow; use simple present 'it depends' to match habitual preference. Remove extra 'it' and filler for clarity.

× When I have, uh, when I am at my office and workplace, I prefer to typing because most of the my work is done by the computer or laptop.

✓ When I am at my office or workplace, I prefer typing because most of my work is done on the computer or laptop.

Errors: unnecessary 'to' before gerund (should be 'prefer typing'), incorrect article 'the my' (use 'my'), and wrong preposition 'by the computer' (use 'on the computer'). Also 'office and workplace' is redundant; use 'office or workplace'.

× And whenever I I'm at my home and I reading some books, I prefer handwriting because the notes are.

✓ When I am at home and reading books, I prefer handwriting because I can take notes.

Problems: incorrect contraction 'I I'm' and wrong verb form 'I reading' (need 'am reading' or rephrase). Fragment 'because the notes are.' is incomplete; clarify purpose. Use 'I can take notes' to complete thought and match present habit.

× As I am visa filing executive at immigration, so I prefer laptop or keyboard everyday at my workplace because it helps me to work uh, complete my task on time as well as keep uh, it will keep it is it will keep my time as well.

✓ As I am a visa-filing executive at immigration, I prefer using a laptop or keyboard every day at my workplace because it helps me complete my tasks on time and saves time.

Errors: missing article 'a' before job title, need hyphen in 'visa-filing', 'everyday' should be 'every day' for frequency, extra 'so' is redundant after 'as', unnecessary infinitive 'helps me to work complete' should be 'helps me complete', plural 'task'→'tasks', and repetitive phrasing 'keep it will keep it is it will keep my time' should be simplified to 'saves time'.

× Apart from it, I prefer to laptop on my workplace because it helps.

✓ Besides that, I prefer to use a laptop at my workplace because it helps.

Problems: 'Apart from it' is awkward; 'Besides that' is better. 'prefer to laptop' is incorrect — use 'prefer to use a laptop' or 'prefer a laptop'. 'on my workplace' should be 'at my workplace'.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Question is correct and matches past tense asking; no correction needed.

× I learn a lot of things while typing on the keyboard, such as uh, spelling mistakes, grammar, grammar errors, and uh, how to make complex, tense enough and and, uh, sentence structure and so on.

✓ I learned a lot while typing on the keyboard, such as spelling, grammar, how to form complex tenses, and sentence structure.

Use past tense 'learned' to answer completed learning; remove redundant words 'grammar errors' and fillers, correct phrase 'how to make complex, tense enough' to 'how to form complex tenses'. Simplify 'and so on'."

× Moreover, I also learn from the keyboard.

✓ Moreover, I also learned from typing on the keyboard.

Use past tense 'learned' for past experience and clarify source with 'typing on the keyboard' rather than 'from the keyboard'. 'Learn from the keyboard' is unnatural.

× Well, there are multiple videos and ways to improve our typing skills via the help of Google and YouTube videos.

✓ There are several videos and methods to improve our typing skills using Google and YouTube.

Use 'several' or 'multiple' is okay but 'via the help of' is awkward; use 'using'. Avoid repeating 'videos' twice; replace 'ways' with 'methods' for variety.

× I also have take help from the YouTube videos how to how to increase our typing skills and how to accurate our typing skills.

✓ I have also taken help from YouTube videos on how to increase our typing speed and how to improve the accuracy of our typing.

Grammar: 'have take' should be present perfect 'have taken'. Remove duplicated 'how to'. Use specific collocations: 'increase typing speed' and 'improve accuracy'.

× Apart from it, it also help me to incomplete my work at time.

✓ Besides that, it also helps me complete my work on time.

Errors: 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'it' (third person singular). 'to incomplete' is wrong; use 'complete'. 'at time' should be 'on time'. 'Apart from it' is awkward; use 'Besides that'.