打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сократите повторения, исправьте грамматические ошибки и сформулируйте основной ответ в одном предложении, затем приведите одно конкретное объяснение. Используйте связку для логики (например, "because"). Например, замените "it is more easy" на "it's easier" и уберите эмоционные фразы вроде "I hate to write", формулируя более нейтрально.

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and my handwriting is hard to read, so typing helps me communicate clearly.

建議: Уберите бессмысленные повторы, дайте чёткое структурированное предложение о типе устройства и добавьте одну-две причины с связочными словами (например, "because", "so"). Избегайте разговорных междометий "yeah" в формальном ответе.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I work remotely and use it for emails, documents and video calls.

建議: Устраните повторы и ошибки времени, используйте связки для последовательности действий (например, "when", "after") и сформируйте чёткое время обучения. Сократите до 2–3 предложений: когда учился, как практиковался и результат.

範例: I learned to touch-type when I was at school and practiced a lot to memorise key positions, so now I can type quickly.

建議: Упростите и уточните: назовите метод и опишите конкретную практику с временными маркерами и результатом. Исправьте ошибки (например, "used to this program" -> "used this program", "accurate" -> "accurately"). Не повторяйтесь и используйте связки "so" или "as a result".

範例: I improved my typing by using a special training program during school; as a result of regular practice, I now type quickly and accurately.

× I definitely prefer typing, it is more easy for me.

✓ I definitely prefer typing; it is easier for me.

Use the comparative form 'easier' (adjective) instead of 'more easy'. Also replace the comma with a semicolon or split into two sentences for correct punctuation and clarity.

× To be honest, I hate to write and when I write it is usually awkward and nobody understand anything what is written.

✓ To be honest, I hate writing, and when I write it is usually awkward and nobody understands anything that is written.

Use the gerund 'writing' after 'hate' rather than 'to write' for natural phrasing. Correct subject-verb agreement 'nobody understands'. Use 'that' to introduce the relative clause 'that is written'. Also add a comma before 'and' to improve sentence structure.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no change. Subject 'I' and verb 'type' agree in present simple tense.

× I have a laptop, a laptop, laptop, laptop and it is.

✓ I have a laptop, and I use it a lot.

Remove repetitive words and complete the sentence with a clear verb to convey meaning. The original is fragmented and unclear; 'and I use it a lot' provides a coherent continuation.

× I use it in my work and I work remotely, so yeah.

✓ I use it for my work and I work remotely, so yes.

Use 'for my work' instead of 'in my work' for natural collocation. Replace informal 'so yeah' with 'so yes' if slightly more formal; maintain coherence by keeping the sentence concise.

× I remember I learned and trained trained a lot when I was a student.

✓ I remember that I learned and practiced a lot when I was a student.

Use 'practiced' instead of repeated 'trained trained'. Include 'that' after 'remember' (optional) for clarity. Past tense 'learned' and 'practiced' correctly match the time frame 'when I was a student'.

× I really tried to learn where letters are situated on the keyboard and it helped me in future I I'm typing usually very fast.

✓ I really tried to learn where the letters are located on the keyboard, and it helped me in the future; now I usually type very fast.

Use 'located' instead of 'situated' for naturalness and add the article 'the' before 'letters'. Use the prepositional phrase 'in the future'. Correct tense sequence and word order: 'now I usually type very fast'. Remove redundant 'I' and fix punctuation.

× As I mentioned before, I was a student and I remember was a special program to improve your typing and I really used to this program and trained.

✓ As I mentioned before, when I was a student, I remember there was a special program to improve typing, and I used that program and trained with it.

Include 'when' to link 'I was a student'. Insert 'there' for 'there was a special program'. Use 'typing' without 'your' to keep it general. Replace 'used to this program' with 'used that program' and add 'with it' to clarify how you trained.

× So after this training I really succeed in typing and now I type very quickly and accurate.

✓ So after this training I really succeeded in typing, and now I type very quickly and accurately.

Use past tense 'succeeded' to refer to a completed action. Use the adverb 'accurately' (not adjective 'accurate') to modify the verb 'type'. Add a comma before 'and' for clarity.