打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and clarity: use simple correct tenses and singular/plural forms, avoid repetition, and give a concise reason with a clear supporting example. Structure your answer with a topic sentence, one supporting detail and a short specific example. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" correctly.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember what I write. For example, I spend time writing in a notebook every weekend, and I find that reviewing those notes later makes facts easier to recall.

建議: Be concise and avoid fillers (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and one or two examples. Use full phrases (e.g. "use a laptop") and finish your sentence with a complete example.

範例: I usually type on a laptop because I don't have a desktop. It is more convenient to carry, so I often use it at school or in a café when I need to work.

建議: Correct verb forms and sentence boundaries: use past simple consistently for past events, and avoid run-on sentences. Give one clear time reference and one specific result of learning to type (e.g. emailing, school work).

範例: I learned to type when I was a child; my father taught me. Over the years I improved, which made it much easier to email teachers and write school assignments.

建議: Use correct grammar and more precise language: say "I practice" not "I practiced" for regular habits. Explain a clear method (e.g. timed exercises, lessons) and a concrete benefit. Keep to two or three sentences maximum and include a linking word like "by" or "so".

範例: I improve my typing by practicing for 20–30 minutes every night using online typing exercises. This regular practice increases my speed and helps me focus when I write.

× I prefer handwriting because it helped me to to remember the thing I write and improve my memories.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me to remember what I write and improves my memory.

Errors: 'helped' is past tense but speaker is stating a general preference, so present tense 'helps' is correct (Grammar Problem Type 10). 'to to' has duplicated 'to'. 'the thing I write' is unnatural; use 'what I write'. 'improve my memories' is wrong word choice and number; use uncountable 'memory' or 'my memory'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual/general facts and correct collocations: 'helps me to remember what I write and improves my memory.'

× For example, I like to write 2 days in weekend. Every.

✓ For example, I like to write two days on the weekend.

Errors: '2' should be written as a word in formal speech but that's stylistic; main issues: 'in weekend' incorrect preposition; use 'on the weekend' or 'on weekends'. 'Every.' is a fragment. This is a singular/plural and preposition combination problem (Grammar Problem Type 1). Suggestion: use 'two days on the weekend' or 'on weekends' and remove the fragment.

× Usually I write in laptop because I don't have desktop uh.

✓ Usually I write on my laptop because I don't have a desktop.

Errors: 'in laptop' wrong preposition and missing possessive/article; use 'on my laptop' (preposition and pronoun) and 'a desktop' requires an article (Grammar Problem Type 17). Suggestion: say 'on my laptop' and 'a desktop'.

× Moreover, it's easier to write and uh, take it to any place you go.

✓ Moreover, it's easier to write on it and take it to any place you go.

Errors: Missing preposition 'on' for 'write on it' and unclear pronoun reference; original used 'write and ... take it' which requires 'write on it' (Grammar Problem Type 11). Suggestion: include 'on' and keep pronoun 'it' referring to the laptop: 'write on it and take it anywhere you go.'

× For example, in school, in cafe, in.

✓ For example, I use it in school, in cafes, and elsewhere.

Errors: Fragmentary list ending with 'in.' is incomplete and lacks parallel structure (Grammar Problem Type 26). Also 'cafe' should be plural or have an article when listing general places. Suggestion: provide parallel items and complete the list: 'in school, in cafes, and elsewhere.'

× I learned to write in keyboard when I was a child, my father teach me.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was a child; my father taught me.

Errors: 'write in keyboard' is wrong verb and preposition; use 'type on the keyboard'. 'teach' should be past tense 'taught' to match 'learned' (Grammar Problem Type 5). Suggestion: maintain past tense for past events and use correct verb: 'learned to type on the keyboard... my father taught me.'

× After years I improved that skills and it helped me to to contact with any friend or teacher and help me to write e-mail, article and anything.

✓ After years I improved those skills, and they helped me contact friends or teachers and write emails, articles, and other things.

Errors: 'that skills' should be 'those skills' (demonstrative agreement) and 'it helped' should agree with plural 'skills' -> 'they helped' (Grammar Problem Type 13). 'to to' duplicated. 'contact with' is incorrect; use 'contact friends' or 'get in contact with'. 'e-mail' pluralize to 'emails'; 'article' plural 'articles'. Suggestion: use plural agreement and correct collocations: 'those skills... they helped me contact friends or teachers and write emails and articles.'

× I improve my typing by practiced every day.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day.

Errors: After 'by' use gerund '-ing' form, so 'practicing' not past 'practiced' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Suggestion: use 'by practicing every day' for the method of improvement.

× Usually I do that at night. It's help me to improve my memories and make me focused better.

✓ Usually I do that at night. It helps me improve my memory and helps me stay more focused.

Errors: 'It's help' should be 'It helps' (subject-verb agreement and auxiliary misuse). 'improve my memories' incorrect noun; use 'memory'. 'make me focused better' is awkward; use 'helps me stay more focused' (Grammar Problem Type 12). Suggestion: fix verb agreement and use natural expressions: 'It helps me improve my memory and stay more focused.'