打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: state your preference in one sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition, filler words (uh, I like), and incorrect grammar (use 'prefer handwriting' not 'prefer to handwriting').

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I retain details more easily, so I often choose handwriting for studying.

建議: Answer directly which device you use and why, using correct prepositions and concise wording. Use a linking word to explain reason and give a brief detail about frequency or circumstance. Avoid vague phrases like 'hard working skill'.

範例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient for me. However, I find laptop keyboards uncomfortable sometimes, so I try to use an external keyboard when I type for long periods.

建議: Give a clear, grammatically correct time statement and optionally add a short supporting detail (how or why you learned then). Keep it to one or two sentences and avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard in 2021 when I started online courses. I practised daily for a few months to improve my speed.

建議: Explain specific methods you use to improve typing with clear linking words and concrete examples. Avoid vague generalities and repetition. Mention frequency, tools, or exercises to show depth.

範例: I improve my typing by practising with online typing tutors for 20 minutes every day. In addition, I copy short articles to build accuracy and use typing games to increase my speed.

× I like, I like to write handwriting and I always prefer to handwriting because, uh, typing is the skill and everyone cannot do this skill.

✓ I like to write by hand and I always prefer handwriting because typing is a skill that not everyone can do.

The student used 'to handwriting' and 'write handwriting' incorrectly; 'write by hand' or 'handwriting' as a noun is correct. Also 'everyone cannot do this skill' is awkward; use a relative clause 'a skill that not everyone can do'. Replace redundant filler and improve word order. Suggested improvement: practice using 'write by hand' for the action and use relative clauses to describe skills.

× I often type to laptop but I don't like that because I think it is the uh, hard working skill.

✓ I often type on a laptop but I don't like it because I think it is a hard skill.

Use preposition 'on' with 'laptop' ('type on a laptop'). 'Type to laptop' is incorrect. Also 'hard working skill' is wrong collocation; use 'hard skill' or 'difficult skill'. Replace 'that' with 'it' to refer to the activity. Suggested improvement: learn common prepositions with devices ('on a laptop', 'on a desktop').

× I often type to laptop but I don't like that because I think it is the uh, hard working skill. I don't have this skill but it is the good for everyone to type laptop.

✓ I don't have this skill, but it is good for everyone to be able to type on a laptop.

Pronoun and article errors: use 'be able to type' for ability and 'on a laptop' for preposition. 'It is the good' should be 'it is good'. Combine sentences and use natural phrasing 'be able to'. Suggested improvement: practice forming sentences about ability with 'can' or 'be able to' and use correct articles.

× I was learn to type on the keyboard in 2021 and.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard in 2021.

Incorrect past tense form 'was learn' should be simple past 'learned'. The auxiliary 'was' is unnecessary here. Remove trailing 'and' which is incomplete. Suggested improvement: use simple past for completed actions at a specific time (I learned in 2021).

× I think typing is the most important to the own own shield because it is the only skill and everyday you need to more practice in the typing.

✓ I think typing is very important for oneself because it is a useful skill and you need to practice typing every day.

Several tense and word choice issues: 'the most important to the own own shield' is incorrect; use 'important for oneself' or 'important for your own benefit'. 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb) — use 'every day'. 'need to more practice in the typing' should be 'need to practice more' or 'need to practice typing more'. Suggested improvement: use clear subjects and standard adverb placement ('practice more', 'every day').

× I think it is the improve your typing skill.

✓ I think it improves your typing skill.

Wrong verb form 'the improve' and incorrect use of 'it is'. Use the verb 'improves' in present simple to state a general truth. Also 'your typing skill' is acceptable but 'your typing skills' (plural) is more natural. Suggested improvement: practice subject-verb agreement and use correct verb forms for general statements.