旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接、信息完整，并给出了频率、同伴和原因。建议在“very often”和“just”之间加逗号或停顿；“at weekends”可以使用，但“on weekends”更常见。还可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或骑车后的感受，使答案更生动。

範例: I don’t ride a bicycle very often—probably only once a week. I usually go cycling with my daughter on weekends because it’s a pleasant way to get some exercise. We often ride along a riverside path near our home.

建議: 答案的基本结构清楚，也给出了原因，但“decide when to live”用词错误，应该是“decide when to leave”；“visit places further away”表达不够自然，可以改为“travel to places that are farther away”。建议再补充一个具体结果，例如开车更方便、节省等车时间。

範例: I usually drive when I travel because I can decide when to leave and visit places that are farther away. It’s also more convenient because I don’t have to wait for public transport or carry my luggage around.

建議: 观点和原因都很明确，但需要在“Yes, I do.”之后停顿或分句。句末“switch off for a wire”不符合英语表达；如果想说“放松、暂时不想工作”，可以说“switch off for a while”或“clear my mind”。建议使用逗号和连接词，并补充一个具体场景。

範例: Yes, I do. I prefer sitting by the window because I can enjoy the scenery and switch off for a while. On long train journeys, watching the countryside helps me relax and clear my mind.

建議: 回答了问题，并提供了旅行地点和活动，但“when I was a child with Si Tianman”结构不清晰；如果“Si Tianman”是时间表达，建议确认其准确含义并改用正确英文。如果想表达“坐了四天慢车”，可以说“we travelled by slow train for four days”。另外，“the Forbidden City”中的专有名词需要大写，建议补充旅程给你留下的印象。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I travelled to Beijing with my family by slow train, and the journey took about four days. We visited the Forbidden City, and I was fascinated by its huge courtyards and beautiful traditional buildings.

× Yes I do I prefer to sit by the window because I can enjoy the scenery and switch off for a wire.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer to sit by the window because I can enjoy the scenery and switch off for a while.

“Yes, I do”是对一般疑问句的完整回答，后面需要用句号与主句分开，不能直接连续连接两个独立句子。应改为“ Yes, I do. I prefer...”。另外，“for a wire”不是正确的固定表达；表示“暂时放松、不去想事情”时，应使用“for a while”。