旅行— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
考生
It depends on the distance that I have to take. If I have to sit on the bus or on the plane for a long time, like two or three hours, I prefer sitting by the window because I can enjoy the side, uh, outside.
考官
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
考生
Yes I do, we used to have a long trip to where city as a child. Uh a trip is about 3 days and we have a lot of fun. We had a lot of fun there. I hope that we will have another long trip in the future.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
分數: 78.0建議: Câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu điều kiện rồi đưa ra sở thích và lý do. Tuy nhiên, “the distance that I have to take” chưa tự nhiên; nên dùng “how long the journey is” hoặc “the length of the journey”. Cụm “enjoy the side, uh, outside” bị ngập ngừng và dùng từ chưa chính xác; nên nói “enjoy the view outside”. Có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn, nhưng vẫn nên giữ trong 2–4 câu.
範例: It depends on how long the journey is. If I’m travelling for more than two or three hours, I prefer sitting by the window because I can enjoy the view outside and watch the scenery change. It also helps me feel less bored during the trip.
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
分數: 62.0建議: Câu trả lời đúng hướng và có các chi tiết như thời lượng chuyến đi và cảm xúc, nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu: “Yes, I did”, “we had” và “we had a lot of fun”. “To where city” không chính xác; hãy thay bằng tên địa điểm hoặc “to another city”. Hai câu “we have a lot of fun” và “We had a lot of fun there” bị lặp ý, nên gộp lại. Ngoài ra, “I hope that we will...” chuyển sang tương lai khá đột ngột; có thể nói “I’d love to do it again someday” để tự nhiên hơn.
範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I took a three-day trip to Da Nang. We visited several interesting places, ate delicious local food, and had a lot of fun together. I’d love to go on a similar family trip again someday.
文法
× Yes I do.
✓ Yes, I did.
The question uses the past tense, 'Did you have...?', so the answer should also use the past auxiliary 'did,' not the present auxiliary 'do.'
× We used to have a long trip to where city as a child.
✓ We used to go on long trips to different cities when I was a child.
The original sentence has an incorrect structure in 'to where city.' Use the natural structure 'go on trips to different cities.' Also, 'when I was a child' clearly expresses the past time referred to by 'used to.'
× A trip is about 3 days.
✓ The trip was about three days long.
The student is describing a completed trip in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense: 'was,' not 'is.' The phrase 'three days long' is also the correct structure for describing the duration of a trip.
× We have a lot of fun there.
✓ We had a lot of fun there.
This sentence refers to a completed trip in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense: 'had,' not 'have.'
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