旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly with “Yes, I do” and explain your preference using a clear reason and a specific example. “Induce it” is incorrect in this context; use “choose a window seat” or “sit by the window.” Also, say “make memories” rather than “enjoy the view with lots of memories,” and use “take pictures” instead of “click pictures” for more natural English. Avoid repetition and finish with “by the window,” not “in the window by the.”

範例: Yes, I do. I usually choose a window seat because the view is refreshing and helps me relax during the journey. I also enjoy taking pictures of interesting landscapes, especially when I am travelling through the countryside.

建議: Use the past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: say “I had” and “we went,” not “I have,” “I go,” or “I have a long journey.” Avoid repeating words such as “which is which is,” and correct “sewage” to “sea beach” or “longest natural sea beach,” if that is what you mean. The answer should clearly describe the journey and include one or two specific details, such as the destination, travel time, or an activity. “Refreshment” is not natural here; use “relaxation,” “enjoyment,” or “wonderful memories.”

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I took a long trip to Cox’s Bazar, which is famous for its long natural sea beach. The journey took several hours, but we enjoyed talking, eating snacks, and spending time together. It was a memorable experience for the whole family.

× Yes, I love to induce it as always because it's so refreshing and I can enjoy the view with lots of memories and moreover, I can click pictures on my phone when I sit in the window by the.

✓ Yes, I love to induce it as always because it's so refreshing and I can enjoy the view with lots of memories and moreover, I can click pictures on my phone when I sit by the window.

The correct preposition is by when referring to a person's position next to a window. Sit in the window suggests being physically inside the window, which is not the intended meaning.

× Yes, I have a long journey.

✓ Yes, I had a long journey.

The question asks about a journey in the past, using Did you have. Therefore, the answer should also use the simple past tense, had, instead of the present-tense form have.

× When I was a child I we went to the Cox's Bazar, which is which is the longest sewage in the world.

✓ When I was a child, we went to the Cox's Bazar, which is the longest sewage in the world.

The subject I is incorrectly combined with the subject we. Use only we because we is the subject of went. The phrase which is is also unnecessarily repeated. A comma should follow the introductory clause When I was a child.

× When I was a child I we went to the Cox's Bazar, which is which is the longest sewage in the world.

✓ When I was a child, we went to Cox's Bazar, which is the longest sewage in the world.

Cox's Bazar is a proper place name and normally does not take the definite article the. Say went to Cox's Bazar, not went to the Cox's Bazar.

× I go there with my whole family and it was a memorable journey with lots of refreshment.

✓ I went there with my whole family and it was a memorable journey with lots of refreshment.

The speaker is describing a completed journey in the past. The verb go must therefore be changed to its simple past form, went.