旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and use the natural expression “gives me the opportunity to see” instead of “offers me to see.” Also, “the scenery outside the train” is more natural than “an environment outside the train.” Add one specific reason, such as enjoying the view or feeling less bored, and connect it with “because” or “especially.”

範例: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I can enjoy the scenery outside the train. I especially like watching the countryside and taking photos during long journeys. It also helps me feel less bored.

建議: Use the past tense consistently because the question refers to childhood: say “we went” and “we relaxed” or “we used to relax.” The phrase “many places infamous” is incorrect; use “many famous places” or “many well-known destinations.” Give a specific example of a destination and explain what your family did there. Avoid repeating “when I was a child” if the context is already clear.

範例: Yes, I went on several long journeys with my family when I was a child. We visited many famous places, including a historic city near the coast. We usually listened to music, talked, and relaxed together during the journey.

× Yes, I prefer to sit next to the window when I travel because it offers me to see an environment outside the train.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit next to the window when I travel because it allows me to see the scenery outside the train.

The structure offer me to see is not grammatically correct. Use allow someone to do something, or offer someone something. Here, allows me to see correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was a child. We went to many places infamous and we always relaxed when we go out together.

✓ Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was a child. We went to many places, and we always relaxed when we went out together.

The answer describes a completed experience in the past, so the verb go must be changed to its past-tense form, went. The conjunction and also clearly connects the two past actions.