旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，理由也相关，但“take some photos from my social media”搭配不自然，应改为“take some photos for my social media”。此外，可以加入一个具体场景或结果，使答案更生动；注意避免重复使用“can”。

範例: Yes, I do. I prefer a window seat because I can enjoy beautiful views along the way and take photos for my social media. For example, I once photographed some amazing mountains during a train journey.

建議: 答案的主要问题是时态、句子结构和表达不清。题目询问过去的经历，应使用一般过去时，例如“Did you have”可回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”。“when I was child”应改为“when I was a child”，“go for Xinjiang”应改为“went to Xinjiang”；同时应说明旅行方式、持续时间或具体感受，并使用“because”或“so”等连接词。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I went to Xinjiang with my family, and the journey took almost two days by train. It was a long trip, but I really enjoyed seeing the different landscapes along the way.

× Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I think I can see more beautiful views and can take some photos from my social media.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I think I can see more beautiful views and can take some photos for my social media.

“For my social media”表示“为了发布到我的社交媒体上”。“From my social media”表示“来自我的社交媒体”，不符合这里的语意。

× Here's when I was child I have a long journey with my family go for Xinjiang.

✓ When I was a child, I had a long journey with my family and went to Xinjiang.

“Here's when”不能这样引导时间经历；原句还把多个动词和从句直接连接在一起，导致句子结构混乱。可以用“When I was...”引导时间状语，并用“and”连接两个过去发生的动作。

× I was child.

✓ I was a child.

可数名词“child”表示单数时，前面通常需要使用冠词。“a child”表示“一个孩子”。

× When I was a child, I have a long journey with my family.

✓ When I was a child, I had a long journey with my family.

“When I was a child”描述的是过去的时间，因此后面的经历也应该使用一般过去时。“have”要改为过去式“had”。

× My family go for Xinjiang.

✓ My family went to Xinjiang.

这是过去发生的旅行，所以“go”要使用过去式“went”。注意“go”的过去式是不规则变化，不能直接加“-ed”。

× My family went for Xinjiang.

✓ My family went to Xinjiang.

表示“去某个地方”时，动词“go”后面通常使用介词“to”，所以应说“went to Xinjiang”，而不是“went for Xinjiang”。

× It's the Western city in China.

✓ Xinjiang is in western China.

新疆不是一个城市，因此不能用“It’s the Western city”来表达。表达地理位置时，可以使用“Xinjiang is in western China”，意思是“新疆位于中国西部”。