旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，理由清楚，也提供了具体景物，整体自然有效。可以注意主谓一致和表达的自然度：将“mountains, rivers and countryside pass by”改为“the mountains, rivers and countryside passing by”，因为这里的景物是伴随“watching”出现的动作。此外，可以补充一个实际结果，使答案更有个人特色，但仍应控制在3—4句话以内。

範例: Yes, I do. I really enjoy sitting by the window because I can watch the mountains, rivers, and countryside passing by. The changing scenery helps me relax, especially during a long train journey.

建議: 回答包含了直接回应、原因和具体活动，结构基本完整。需要改进语法和时态：应说“No, I didn’t.”；“busy with their work”可以改为更自然的“busy working”；由于问题谈论童年经历，最后一句应使用过去时，将“stay”改为“stayed”，并删除不自然的“there”。另外，可以用“Instead”连接转折，让逻辑更清晰。

範例: No, I didn’t. When I was a little girl, my parents were usually busy working, so we didn’t take many long trips. Instead, we stayed at home, watched TV, and played computer games together.

× So we normally stay there at home to watch TV and play computer games together.

✓ So we normally stayed at home to watch TV and play computer games together.

这段话描述的是过去小时候的经历，前文使用了过去时“was”和“didn't have”，因此这里也应使用一般过去时。“stay”的过去式是“stayed”。另外，“there”在“at home”前面语义重复，因此删除。建议讲述过去的习惯或经历时，保持整段时态一致，常用“would”或一般过去时来表达过去的习惯。