旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接表达了偏好，也提供了原因和让步观点，内容基本完整。但“looking at the sensor”应改为“looking at the scenery”，“and again take”表达不自然；同时句子过长，多个观点挤在一起，影响清晰度。建议使用“because”和“although”连接不同信息，并将答案分成2—3句。还可以具体说明沿途看到的景色或拍照的原因，避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I prefer sitting by the window when I travel because I enjoy watching the scenery change along the way. I can also take photos of interesting views, such as mountains or coastal landscapes. However, I sometimes choose an aisle seat on overnight journeys because it is easier to get up and move around.

建議: 答案有明确回答，并提供了时间、目的、时长和感受等细节，结构较好。不过“when little”应改为“when I was little”，“took long took long join trips”存在明显重复和用词错误，应改为“went on long journeys”或“took long trips”。建议先用一个清晰的主题句回答，再按“具体经历—结果或感受”的顺序展开，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was little, my family often went on long trips during the school holidays. We sometimes travelled to visit relatives who lived several hours away, so the journeys were quite tiring. Nevertheless, I enjoyed seeing new places and spending quality time with my family.

× Yes I like sitting by the window when I travel because I enjoy looking at the sensor the changing landscape keeps me interested and again take nice photos of the view, although it's easier for me to fall asleep when I sit by the window.

✓ Yes, I like sitting by the window when I travel because I enjoy looking at the sensor. The changing landscape keeps me interested, and I take nice photos of the view, although it is easier for me to fall asleep when I sit by the window.

原句中“because I enjoy looking at the sensor”后面直接接“The changing landscape keeps me interested”，缺少正确的句子分隔，导致多个完整句子连在一起。此外，“and again take”缺少明确的主语，句子结构不完整。可以使用句号分开完整句子，并重复主语“I”来使结构清晰。

× Yes, I did one when little my family took long took long join trips during the school holiday.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was little, my family took long trips during the school holiday.

“when little”不是完整的时间从句，应该说“When I was little”，其中需要主语“I”和系动词“was”。原句中的“took long took long join trips”存在重复和结构混乱，删除重复部分并改为“took long trips”后，句子结构更加完整、自然。