旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and complete your sentence. Use the correct grammar: “when I travel,” not “when I travelling.” Also, “watching sightseeing” is unnatural; say “enjoying the scenery” or “sightseeing.” Add a specific reason and example, and use a linking word such as “especially.” Note that the correct spelling is “Mount Fuji.”

範例: Yes, I definitely prefer sitting by the window when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery. For example, on a trip to Japan, I would love to see Mount Fuji from the train. It also makes long journeys more relaxing.

建議: Use the past simple because you are talking about a childhood experience: “I travelled,” not “I have travelled.” Avoid repeating “we have we went,” and make the final phrase clear; “this prayer” does not communicate a meaning in this context. Answer whether the journey was long, then add the destination, transport, and one specific detail.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family and I took a long train journey to Atami. It took several hours, but I enjoyed looking at the countryside and spending time with my family.

× Yes, of course I love sitting by the window when I travelling because I enjoy watching sightseeing for example Mount Huji in

✓ Yes, of course, I love sitting by the window when I am traveling because I enjoy sightseeing, for example, at Mount Fuji in Japan.

The clause when I travelling describes an action happening during travel, so it needs the present progressive form: am traveling. The subject I requires the auxiliary verb am before the present participle traveling.

× Yes, of course I love sitting by the window when I travelling because I enjoy watching sightseeing for example Mount Huji in

✓ Yes, of course, I love sitting by the window when I am traveling because I enjoy sightseeing, for example, at Mount Fuji in Japan.

The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund or an -ing form. In this context, sightseeing is already the appropriate gerund, so watching sightseeing is unnecessary and unnatural. Use enjoy sightseeing instead.

× Yes, I have travelled with my family when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I traveled with my family when I was a child.

When I was a child refers to a completed period in the past. Therefore, use the simple past traveled rather than the present perfect have traveled. Avoid using the present perfect with a specific finished time in the past.

× We have we went to Atami this prayer.

✓ We went to Atami.

The trip to Atami was a completed event in the past, so use the simple past went. Do not combine have with the simple past went. Also, this prayer does not fit the meaning of the sentence and should be omitted unless a different intended word is known.

× We have we went to Atami this prayer.

✓ We went to Atami.

The sentence contains a repeated subject and unnecessary auxiliary verb: have we went. A simple past sentence needs one subject and one main verb. Use the clear structure subject plus past-tense verb: We went.